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Comment by check this out on 11/20/13
6lXtoZ Very informative article post.Really looking forward to read more. Want more. Comment by Anu on 06/15/12 Dear Nom de plume..... Comment by Silvia ( from Brazil) on 01/14/10 WOW! Terrific, amazing and a great love story! Comment by sissy4ula on 06/28/04 i luved this story. It was so well written that it would be a great story even without the tittilating bits i love. I especially luv the realistic way our "heroine" discovers his true sissy self (while at first dressing for non-sexual reasons)... and finds he is much more fulfilled being a pretty girl for a real man. Comment by solon on 06/11/03 As Julie said, a real page turner! Obviously, the character development at end of part 5 says more is forthcoming.....she did ruin his life after all, and now they are getting acquainted again. What's gonna happen? This story has a life of its own! Well done.... Comment by solon on 06/01/03 Just started this story Nom but like part 1.....like the realistic feel you achieve. Will print rest tonight.....and leave review on last part(5)... Comment by C-Monster on 05/24/03 This story remind me of a real life story of a con man dress an a woman who was trying to lure investors in to a car company he was starting up back in the 70's. Part one was fanatic can't wait to read the rest of the story line. Comment by Kirsty on 05/22/03 I'm so glad you have carried on with this story!! Comment by Jane Hudson on 05/20/03 Great story loved it my dear. Comment by Phil on 05/09/03 What a story, what a cliff hanger, what luck, what fun, part 3 can only get better. Comment by Julie Shaw on 05/08/03 Part 2 carries on the wonderful style and prose. The story is captivating, and if it was actually a hard copy book, I'd call it a real page turner! Keep it up - I am anxiously awaiting Part 3! Comment by Julie Shaw on 05/07/03 Excellent story - well composed and good characters. I love where you've taken it, and can't wait to see where it's going! Comment by Julie on 05/07/03 The description of the transformation is excellent. However, it's not every day that an early twenties- something woman walks into a bank and announces that she's opening an account with half a million dollars. Even a Jennifer Aniston lookalike (yes, I liked the part about the photomorphing- nice touch) might have trouble pulling that off without someone getting a tiny bit suspicious- interesting to see how our "hero" gets away with it. Comment by Kirsty on 05/07/03 Wow, the writing style and quality is exceptional. |
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