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Opposite Paths
by Julia Manchester

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Comment by suba me on 05/15/17
8rWHA9 Loving the info on this web site, you have done outstanding job on the articles.

Comment by Mubeen on 04/09/12
Hola que bellas fotos , frouen sacadas por varios footgrafos ubicados estrategicamente? realmente muy especiales, que mas ? me encantaron son las fotos que me gustan.. sin preparacion, pero no por eso sin calidad. gracias por compartirlas

Comment by johnny on 05/06/09
hi julia,

         this story was awesome n the best one i read so far. especially here the former wife did not humiliate the former husband but in fact suported him as much as she could till the end. but alas all the good points evaporated after reading the last paragragh.

         i am not saying that what tracy did is srong or right because you did not mention the reason for her drastic decision. was she a F2M, or was dan a abusive husband.

         here is my suggestion to you which i hope you would consider. can u write a sequel of this story where the reason is revealed shortly n after that the story starts off with how dan although has come in terms with his womanhood is devastated on stepping into motherhood. as its not easy for a man. how is slowly evolves into a complete woman at the end of the pregnancy and also how reacts finally when he comes to know of tracy's devious plan. how would he forgive her.

        it would certianly be interesting to know these things.


Comment by Silvia. on 03/26/09
Good story!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by chris2 on 02/12/09
this author is by far my favorite .i always look forward to reading the new stories when they come out .wondering if J M has any more comming out?

Comment by JK on 06/17/07
To have a man become a woman is one thing but too many stories leave out the mental changes. The author is one of the best at going into the mind of the people changed. Thanks again for another great one!

Comment by fregen on 06/16/07
Sweet and sentimental?  No.  Very disturbing rather.

Tracy has unilaterally caused a reversal of their roles and I have no clue as to her reason.  Her obvious understanding of what was going to happen removed any doubt that she engineered it.  Was Dan an abuser?  Was Tracy transgendered and always wanted to be a male?  Did she not want to go through child birth?  Don't know.  

Dan seems like an okay guy at the beginning of the story.  Think of the fear, angst, and heartache he must have suffered as he saw his life, his personality, his confidence, his very maleness gradually disappearing.  Evidently Tracy had to steal his maleness to get her own.  And evidently she did without an iota of remorse.  His final acceptance of his lot does not negate her cruelty.

Well written but not a sweet and sentimental story.  But, as always, thanks for sharing.


Comment by Frankie on 06/16/07
I was surprised to see a story that is so much like what has been happening to me over the past several years.  And I have tried all of the things to make me look more masculine again.  I am on the maximum amount of Androgel that I can take and my estrogen level is climbing instead of going down.  Never large my penis has decreased in size so that it is only 2.5 inches fully erect and only as thick as my pinkie finger.  My wife has always preferred my magic tongue as she calls it.  And she enjoys buying me clothes in the women's section.  I once was a 42 waist and a 32 inseam.  Now I can not get into men's pants because my hips are too large for my 32 inch waist.  I can no longer wear men's underware and must wear a size 5 panty and hide my 36 B breasts if I try to pass as a man.  So some of this stuff does actually happen.  My doctor thinks that my full set of female internal organs have suddenly kicked in and caused a lot of the changes.

Comment by totok on 06/15/07
Another good one, I love the ineveitable transition. The story is well written as usual. Well done!

Comment by suna on 06/15/07
The story is reasonably well done for a naration.

This story is a tale of .. a man is always a dick ... no matter how he grows one.  

Truth in advertising is very important tho... The way this story ends does not fit the sweet/sentimental tag you placed.

Best of days with your future writings.


Comment by Mona on 06/14/07
It was a nice read and the storyline wasn't rushed.  There were parts where it started bogging down somewhat but overall, I liked it.

Comment by chris2 on 06/14/07
another fantastic story .one of the best .

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/13/07
If the ending does indeed indicate that everything that happened was premeditated by and deliberately caused by Tracy, then he must never have felt any real love for his spouse and he was always an evil selfish MALE bastard at heart.



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