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Comment by harry on 01/06/10
when is there going to be a part 2 wot happins next did the boy go to colage or did the two of them live as a cupel do not keep as watting tell us now you have head over 3 year to come up with the next part Comment by josh on 11/25/07 I thought that oranges was fantastic.I would love to read a part 2 if there was one. The Jo Jo character is brilliant and kept me hungry for more so please let there be more. I think that killing off the grandmother might be a good idea along with lots of "tutoring". Keep up the good work. Comment by Peter on 10/08/07 I too just stumbled on this amazing series of short stories. And I must say, I was simply blown away and so compelled by the magnitude of what I read that I could not leave without comment. These short stories are some of the best ventures in erotic LITERATURE I've ever read. Yes, Literature! This writting is so forceful and compelling. Awash in eroticism that set the imagination ablaze. What I find obscene about what has been offered here is that the efforts haven't been given their due. Please provide more, and should you ever publish (if you haven't I would advice submitting a resume), please put me on your mailing list. Thank you!!!! Comment by Dillon Doe on 12/09/06 Didn't get that far through the beginning of the story.. Comment by Pippa K. on 12/07/06 This seems an unusual story for Storysite. Perhaps that explains why there's no appropriate category for it. I suggest adding a category entitled "Hardcore gay pedophilia." If we're going to have any more like this, it will make them easier to avoid. |
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