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Orgasm Island
by Don Quixote

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Comment by tammy lynn on 12/20/09
As a subservient male to my wife i liked his story. I am not as subservient to my wife as he writes but truly enjoy taking care of my wife and her needs. More men should help and/or take their wives needs in consideration instead of treating them like slaves.I know alot of men who treat their dogs better than they do their wives. Good Job
Comment by juliej on 06/03/04
not a great story to much easyness in it not a story i enjoy bit boring could do better
Comment by Pervette on 09/08/03
Not to get into a dispute, but although the story is not the kind
that appeals to me, I would not call it drivel. (If I had thought
it was drivel, I would have said nothing.) It's a fantasy, yes. The
stories posted here are all fantasies. Don't let harsh criticism
stop you from writing.
.
--Pervy
Comment by cassandra on 09/07/03
Dear,

I ususally do not take time to comment on drivel such as this. When you decide you want to write fiction instead of fantasy I will give you what I believe to be an honest opinion of your work and writing.

Cassandra
Comment by Pervette on 09/07/03
You'd think that word would get out, that this place isn't what
men expect it to be... "This is what they did to me. Don't let it
happen to you!"
.
--Pervy


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