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Our Love Story
by Pamela Taylor

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Comment by SassySue on 01/24/04
An erotic glimpse of a sexual fantasy between 2 TVs. While entertaining and arousing, this story desperately needs an editor.  Although stream of consciousness writing is acceptable, long, run-on pargraphs are not and make reading difficult.  Gramatical mistakes and misused words (e.g. too), while not rampant, are nevertheless annoying.

Pamela your writing shows a lot of promise and did improve as the story went on.  Please avail yourself of one of the volunteer editors available through Crystal's Author's Corner page.  But in in any event, please continue this sexy story.

SS



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