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Out In The Cold
by Virginia Kane

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Comment by juliej on 03/28/10
its a long story with the action not untill the end it seems to be decribing the run up and it leaves a lot to the imagination not bad

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/18/08
I like the story sort of, but there were some thing left out about Phil you know bill is not as nice at least at the beginning and sort of at the end. i think Phil should of had counseling and found out that he wanted to be a woman all a long.

Comment by Morgan on 12/10/03
Not bad; it has some titillating elements but I would have liked the transformation to have been more complete. I also would have enjoyed the obvious ploy of having Bill become romantically involved as well.


Comment by virginia on 07/20/02
Terry's assessment is correct. I changed my mind about where I wanted to go with the story and ended it.

Comment by Terry on 07/19/02
It seems this story was wrapped up rather quickly, like the author lost interest and just decided to end it.   It turned the story into a long detailed setup but a very short pay off.  



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