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Out of the Closet
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/19/09
I didn't like this story! I'm sorry!

Comment by Dianna on 08/25/08
apparantly she didn't love her brother that much at all.

Comment by Chelsea on 01/14/08
Umm... what just happened? Like, I think we deserve some kind of explanation as to why reality just bent itself backwards O_O!?

Comment by Sam on 09/09/05
OK, so the older sister remembers. It would have been better if she regretted it.

Comment by Wholeman on 04/21/04
I have to agree with others, it has even anoyed me enough to have contacted Crystal over it.  If you cannot determin the actual rating of your stories, then perhaps you need to slow down the creation of them and learn what constitues X rated by Crystals definiton.
Please don't take this wrong, I do read most of your stories, I do like most of your stories.  However I beg you to do an honest rating of the story so that you can post it in the proper manor.

Holly

Comment by Jack on 04/16/04
why was this rated X? the only sexual thing was him very briefly masterbating.

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 04/15/04
This was definitely worth reading.  It started out like so many of the stock "boy forced to wear girl's clothes" stories, but then you added a lovely little twist.  Well-written and quite enjoyable.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 04/15/04
Good story with a wonderful ending. Though I normally prefer memories of the transform person to remain intact nice the older sister at least still remembered.



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