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Paint
by Jill Micayla

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Comment by Janice Lynn on 06/09/07
Jill,
Altho I am writing this comment to you on this story, I just want you to know that I enjoyed ALL of them equally. You do have a way with putting words together for a story to come out. Please continue with your story writing as you will do great. Hugs to you, J-Lynn

Comment by Jennifer Brock on 07/16/05
It was a little confusing after the explosion, as all the various back stories were filled in, and I had to go back and read it twice.

But in this case, I think that actually works well to service the story, as it really helps you identify with the main character's disorientation.



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