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Paint Work
by Joe Six-Pack

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Comment by fust a fan for now (Some day ill be more than just a fan of genderbender fics) on 02/17/08
i like it and it and i think he allways wanted to be kimberly just never knew and 1 lital mistake helped him find out who he or should i say she realy was

Comment by Alana1960 on 02/17/03
One of the funniest stories I've ever read and I liked it!

Great idea and you ran it all over town.

I read this a while back...sorry for the latefeed back.

Keep writing babe.

Alana

Comment by Jill M I on 06/17/02
Darren wasn't wired exactly right.  His illogical assumptions and even more illogical conclusions make a fantastic read!

Darren's wants and desires were made possible by a simple delivery error that gave him the impetus to do what was needed to unleash Kimberly.

Wonderful... yet so unsettling.

It could happen to any of us... if we just let down our guard.. and allowed our innermost thoughts to move us to another dimension... a dimension of sight... a dimension of mind... known as Joe Six Pack's mind.



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