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Pamela's Bridal Shower
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by thruholewizard on 03/05/15

       Sweet and sentimental ,I loved it  Karen is a dream come true .What a shame that there are no or VERY few such as Karen in this world .I look forward to the next story .

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Comment by Molly on 03/17/08
Well written and constructed, as others have already said. Just the fact that it is not stuffed full of mechanical/syntactical errors sets it head and heels above most else out there. However, I had a few credibility/suspension of disbelief issues with it that somewhat lessened my enjoyment.

We are told that Karen, the women's boutique shop owner, has several cross-dressing customers who come to buy for themselves. I do not get a sense of what recommended the main character (Pamela) to Karen as date material above her other customers. As sweet as it is to read about what Karen does with her panties for Tom/Pamela, it is just not credible for a first meeting, where the relationship is still customer and shopkeeper.

As the story and their relationship both develop, Karen showers Pam with love and affection, attention, and gifts. It is not quite as clear to me what Pam is doing for Karen. I am mindful of the fact that it is a common complaint among the wives and girlfriends of trans folk that we sometimes tend to become self-involved. While I think that some of that complaint stems from their not understanding our experience, it is also true that it is easy for us to loose sight of their experience, as well. In this first story, Karen impresses me as literally too good to be true. I haven't read the sequels yet; I hope that the author will have developed Pam and Karen's relationship into something more balanced and credible, that will make for a fantasy that I can actually embrace.


Comment by tammy on 03/18/03
This was an outstanding story of Pamela's transformation.  The story flowed beautifully right to the very end.  It was written so well I could picture myself right there and wished I had been.  I cannot wait to read janis elizabeth's other stories and the other parts to this story.  Keep up the good work janis!  Happy reading!

Comment by H B on 01/13/01
A very nice story! I would like to think every TGed person would want this to happen to them! Please, more stories in the same delightful manner!

Comment by Joan B on 01/05/01
This is a wonderful story!  Good development of a loving relationship.
Great Job!

Comment by Nellie D on 01/04/01
A very nice story of a chance meeting that turned into a loving relationship. It is well written with good descriptions and a nice story line. It kept my interest until the end. Will we read of the wedding? I hope so! Thank you for sharing this with us Janis.

Comment by MartiB on 01/04/01
A very warm and wonderful story.  It sounds like a dream come true for Pamela.  More please!

Comment by paul jutras on 01/04/01
a excellent tale that kept my attention from start to finish.



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