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its a good start but needs a bit more excitenet

I tried to read your story, but it was too closely connected. You have the potential to be a good writer.  Create paragraphs so your reader can breathe.
Once you subdivide you story into paragraphs you will find more readers will be at your doorstep

enjoyed your ideas.  would hope to see part 2 soon, with more "forced
feminization" scenarios.

Im a real pantyboy, I love to wear pantys . i would like to meet male or females, dress up in pantys an more. if your interested email me.       usuchere64@yahoo.com

Take an English class!

I would like to make a few comments. First of all, I DO write stories, here and on two other sites, and have several magazine articles on subjects other than cross-dressing that have been published under my real name.
    I would like to direct the author's attention to the first sentence.  I could not read any more than this horrible run-on sentence.  YOU WROTE: They were bright pink they shining in the light of the laundry room when I picked them up they sparkled like a disco ball they were soft and silky
  TRY THIS:  They were a bright pink, and were shining in the light of the laundry room.  When I picked them up, they seemed to sparkle like a disco ball, but were so soft and silky.  
    You have to either have someone else proofread your work, or you have to learn how to do it yourself, which is hard.  YOU know what you are trying to say, so when you read your own work, you hear the story that you want to tell in your head, and don't see that the story you wrote is not what you think it is.  Maybe you could find a creative writing course at a local community college?  Whatever you do, your writing needs a lot of work before it becomes really readable.
   As to your ideas, don't let anyone tell you what is hot, or not.  If sex with a man, while dressed as a woman, is what you want to write about, then by all means, do so. On this site, and well as a couple of others I know about, there is room for all fantasies.  Good Luck!

Hi,I like the story and hope you DO write more. As for some comments from Lynne and Jaclyn. Well at least you have sat and wrote a story. Would love to know what either of them have written, or do they just like moaning about others. Keep doing what you like and if there is a spelling mistake, so be it. Matthew.  

a good start to a story thst needs to continue
please write more to this story!!!!!

I tried very hard to read this story.  I actually started yesterday, stopped, then tried again today.  I couldn't do it.  It was a very difficult read with all the grammatical and typographical errors.
Please try again, this time have someone proofread it for you.

regards
Lynne

Monday  11/05/2007

 Started Out So Good !  Then The Big Downward
Turn !  You Might Enjoy The "Style" Of Sissy Boy
You've Written About.
 But Survey's Show That A Very large Majority Of
"Us - Girls / Crossdressers" Have  No - Thats  No
Interest In Having Any Sexual Encounters Involving
Other Than w/ Females.  A Kind Of Lesbian Sexual
Liason w/ Our Female Wife And / Or Girl Friends.
 I Hope Your Other Readers Enjoy Your Story But I
Won't Be Reading More.  I Enjoy my Wife As My Lesbian
Lover - Or In A "Straight" Sexual Love.
                               Jaclyn

a goood start to a story thst nedds to continue

hey dont stop now ! i loved the story, thanks

Just horrid, perhaps a horrid as I have tried to read. Rewrite it again and use spellcheck and grammar check.

This appears to have been written by someone with a fevered imagination and a third grade education. How anyone could "hopoe to hear more" is beyond me.

hopoe to hear more nice job