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Part One: A Journey into Submission for Sarah and Daniel
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Comment by Joln on 12/17/13
( smiling ) This is your thing, to get your readers all worked up with promises for a Second Part and there is no Second part. We, the readers, are to fill in the blanks? Your two stories are great,terrific beginnings. I loved both of them. Comment by Sajiya on 07/09/12 Your asnewr was just what I needed. It's made my day! Comment by rjkj on 01/12/12 you all deserve brutle slow death i just wish i could kill you all this bullshit must fall forever you people are sick beyond reconition and for that you must fall i just wish i could be the for this but i have other plan i already have a target tereas bowers and thats all Comment by ulbab on 04/28/10 It's almost 3 years!! Pl Pl tell me when we'll get to read next part of this amazing story. Comment by nycha on 06/09/09 please don´t let us wait to long for part two. Comment by slavetoby on 06/30/08 This is by far the most beautiful and incredible D/s story i have ever read. I honestly wish this was my Mistress and I. Please continue Comment by sinderella on 02/22/08 how can you leave me shivering with anticipation, prepared to live this wonderful fantasy for so, so long, Wonderful Sarah has treated you as I would wish to be treated. The inside of her thigh is a terrible thing to waste. Your journey and mine have just begun Comment by Vanessa on 03/28/07 I hope we don't have to wait too long to learn about Daniels continuing submission to Sarah. Comment by Bobbie Anne on 03/26/07 Slav2femme, I love Part 1 and can hardly wait for what happens next. You're a fantastic writer. Thank you, Bobbie Anne |
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