Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Part-Time Sister
by Cathi King

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Silvia. on 05/19/11
Ty has no mother nor sister. He has two hangmen.
He will grow up, and who knows, what he can do against his mother and sister?
Very bad story.

Comment by Sharon on 06/15/10
Another beautiful story of a young boy being turned into a beautiful girl with the help of his mother and sister,in every young boy there
is a lovely young girl waiting to come oit.

Comment by Aleesha on 06/15/09
Hi

I was surprised how compliant Ty was and I had have wished how you could have told how Tiffany had of continued her transformation into a beuatiful teenager. Thanks.


Comment by juliej on 05/28/07
great story could go on longer but it brilliant the way it was written and also itwas story well worth reading how devious girls can be it seems to have been a setup between mother &daughter as away of treating his agression well done

Comment by vicki on 10/09/06
Short & sweet! Let his hair grow and put it in rag curls for ringlets so he will be a shy little girlboy.

Comment by mikie on 08/21/06
Gosh, how could I have missed this sweet story when it was first posted.  Hopefully, another chapter or two will be written.  What is of greatest joy to me is the "excessive" love and affection shown for the boy as he is slowly changed, one step at a time.  By making it reasonable for the lad to accept each minor step, I find the progress very plausible.    

Comment by juliej on 07/06/06
a good story very sweet and enjoyable the pace was good it seem that mum wanted another girl as opposesed to a boy should put another chapter and bring up the sessions and see if ty will go the whole hog with hormones etc great story

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/17/04
I didn't think it was right for mom and sis to lie to him about the pics.  How cooperative will he be when he finds out?  What looks like a sweet and for the most part willing transition to femininity could get ugly fast.

Comment by julie on 06/16/04
Short but very well written. Very favorite type of story. Need more of this type. Longer stoies of this type would provide very enjoyable reading and pleasant dreams. Luv.



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal