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The Party
by Shefali

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Comment by shailaja on 10/21/09
shefali, i become ur fan with dis story. expecting more stories from u.

Comment by suresh on 05/04/09
your stories are so thrilling and exiting.please write so many stories and fullfill the readers intrest.good luck

Comment by Sandeep on 12/04/08
Shefali,

I really liked your stories, especially the party. Please write more such stories around indian crossdressing.

Sandeep


Comment by Sangeeta on 07/18/08
hi Shefali... a very beautiful story and u are already one of my favourite writers :) u write very well and the story is too good.. but Shefali i wld lik to suggest u use more first person speeches to decorate ur writing skills.. the story is superb but lacks first person conversations and punctuations like " "

Comment by shilpa on 08/05/06
hi it is an excellent story..plzz do come up with more such stories will love to read dem

Comment by anjali on 05/24/06
i like u r story so much bcoz im an indian cross dresser and waiting for u r new stories and i think u will write it soon

Comment by Carol on 04/16/06
I enjoyed reading your four stories.  My wife's sister is married to a man from India and although his is "Western" in his activities, many of his family are traditional and I have been exposed a bit to their culture through family gatherings.  It is interesting to see your explanations of dress and customs, like the sari and the wives waiting on their husbands.

Good writing.


Comment by m bajaj on 04/01/06
i liked your story very much and i want u to rwrite more stories regarding indian crossdressing



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