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The Past Now and Forever
by Ashley Steele

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
vlDYVY P.S My apologies for getting off-topic but I had to ask!

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/23/10
Why did you not end this story?
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 05/18/06
this is a sweet story its unusual in context but a great read i look forewards to reading more thankyou

Comment by Allie on 07/15/03
Nice story so far I like how Ashley's personality is helping Amy to become a stronger person who wants to be in control of her life. What will be interesting is to see what happens to her in a time when this was not normally done.

Comment by Night Wolf on 06/19/03
This is a very good begining.  I know that I would truly love to see this continued until there could be a happy ending for Amy!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/17/03
This has the potential to be a very good story about the life of a rich 19th century teenage girl, but how can this continue to be a TG story if Ashley is killed off , physically AND mentally, in the first episode?  Will Ashley's memory/personality come back?

Comment by julie on 06/16/03
a good start to what is looking like a great story look forword to part two

Comment by pAULA on 06/14/03
a truely lovely story



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