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Patrick's First Training Bra
by Amy Lynn

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
xTZquU Wow! Thank you! I always wanted to write on my site something like that. Can I include a fragment of your post to my website?

Comment by Earring lover on 02/04/15
A nice, sweet story that is just the beginning of what could be a lot more.  Right now Patrick can wear or not wear girls clothes as he chooses, but what will happen when Susan, like most 12 year old girls, asks to have her ears pierced?  Patrick will almost certainly want to have his ears pierced at the same Susan gets her ears pierced and their mother will probably get both children's ears perced at the same time.  Then both Susan and Patrick will have to wear earrings all the time while their ears heal.  No matter where Patrick goes or what he is doing he will have earrings in his ears.  A lot of possibilities for nice stories here.

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/05/14
xnl8tF Thank you ever so for you post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

Comment by julih on 12/14/12
such a sweet story wish it had happened to me

Comment by Silvia. on 06/22/10
Good story.
I liked.
Silvia.

Comment by Sharon on 01/22/10
Another lovely story of a mother allowing her son to become a girl.
My mother helped me from a young age it was beautiful and i loved her for it.

Comment by robert on 11/29/09
 This is a great story and I hope you decide to add more to it.
 My mother, like the mother here, believed that boys and girls should be allowed to experience all things.  When I was 10 she got me my first dress and all the accoutriments that went with it.  She allowed me to dress as a girl as often as I wanted.  My brothers were also allowed, but never adapted to it as I did. My sister thought it was great because she also got to wear boys clothing. I was allowed to do this up til my sixteenth birthday when she stopped buying me dresses.  Unbeknownst to her however I did continue with the help of my sister and a couple of girls in the neighborhood.  I especially liked the light summer dresses and still do today.
 You should really do a follow-up story and maybe take it into his teenage years.  Keep up the good work.

Comment by dyan on 07/09/08
great story and details.  Wouldn't it be nice if in our world all of our parents (of those of us who were inclined)were open to boys trying on sisters or cousins or aunts clothing and other feminine things.  I think our world would be a lot less tense if there was less pressure on us to conform.
       thanks for the wonderful story,
               dyan

Comment by Jenny on 03/17/08
You should do   a story about patrick and susan getting her first period mom get them stuff for their period

Comment by Bobbi on 02/25/08
i hope sum day you will post here your story 'Adam' Thank you

Comment by Amy Sadler on 02/04/08
I realy loved your story, it was so, so sweet!

Amy.


Comment by Hydiegrey on 12/19/07
   I thought it was a nice story, short and to the point.

Comment by Debilyn on 10/21/07
Brings back memories of mail-order catalogs I used to read back in the early '60s, with descriptions of girls' training bras (the top brand was "Lolli-Bra", probably the companion to "Lollipop" panties) and photos showing girls with cascading tresses and such sweet, sweet, innocent smiles, brimming with expectant joy at their glorious new stage of growth, with the most precious treasure of menstruation soon to follow.

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 10/01/07
This is truly precious. Even if Patrick never uses bras or other female underwear when he grows up, he still has the chance here to feel a wonderful sense of kinship and love with his mom and sister by wearing female clothing, at least indoors only (especially bras), and to vicariously know the normal feminine pride girls have when their breasts begin to develop into the glands to supply milk someday to their infants, and they need bras to support and protect them.  Perhaps Patrick can also wear sanitary napkins in his panties when his sister begins her menstrual life.  And he can still grow up to be a man after all this.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/26/07
Very sweet. Makes me wonder if he decides to become a girl or simply dress as a girl

Comment by joan on 11/13/06
I think it would be wonderful to have an understanding mother like patricks

Comment by juliej on 05/14/06
a nice story of a mother understanding her son what ia way to go i wish it was me

Comment by Nicole on 07/18/05
Great story it should continue on how he wears girls underwear through his teens but as a boy wearing girls underwear and not going through with hormones and stuff and him ending up having a happy life

Comment by Matthew on 07/15/05
An interesting story but what else happeins?

Comment by Matthew on 05/09/05
I Found this Story Very interesting and understand it.

Comment by Robin on 05/04/05
This is such a sweet story. I am sure he must have looked so sweet in his panties and bra. Wonderful that he was accepted around the house and seen in his adorable panties.To make it even nicer for him and his sister other members of the family should see them together dressed like that. Hope to see more of this story and when he gets embarresed. thanks

Comment by julie on 01/29/04
a good story but was suprised patricks mother had encouraged him to try girls clothes it must be amazing to have a mother like patricks
intrestng story you could go further with this as well to include hormones etc if patrick really wants to be like his twin sister it would be worth while to see haw far you could go with this story

Comment by Sheena on 07/06/03
I really enjoyed this atory. I didn't find the shift from "third person to first person" difficult at all. Yes, it may be short, but better too short than too long. Some stories could use a little editing, in fact.


Personally, I'd like to see more stories dealing with transvestism in such a healthy, loving way.

Comment by Fran on 07/04/03
It's a very cute story and i enjoyed it. Thank you, hugs, Fran

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 07/03/03
A quick short hammered out story that with further work and a thorough read through by the author would have made it much better.

Nice first effort if this was a first effort.

From first person to third person back and forth. Confusing to read and was a big distraction. The people in the story needed a little more background, no idea of what they looked like a little more discription of their physical features would have helped the story.

I would be interested in seeing you re-write this story and expanding it a little. I know you could do much better with a re-write.

As I said before though, a great first effort and I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Huggles
Angel

Comment by Night Wolf on 07/03/03
I have to say that this story was a good idea and could have actually happen!  However my problem with it was that it was becoming hard to read because it kept leaping from third person into first person type story!  I would have enjoyed it better if I did not have to keep subbing in the words for a regular third person story sense that was how it first started out!

Comment by leah on 07/02/03
People interested in tg themes are human, too. And somehow they (we) got that way. It would be a real scientific breakthrough for Cathy to demonstrate that mothers rarely or never play any role in a tg-person's creation. That won't happen because it isn't so -- sometimes mothers contribute merely by existing at a certain time and at a certain place.

And then, no doubt, some mothers play a more active role. Amy Lynn carefully delineated the conditions of this family. A non-boistrous, inwardly-directed son who has close positive connections with his mother and sister. A sudden experience which meant so much to the two females excluded the third member of this close-knit family.

If we can assume that there are no additional family ties in or near that town, then we can ask what's a single mother to do? Amy Lynn might have made a little more of the boy twin's feelings of rejection (or is it dejection), but it can be easily presupposed. What will become of the boy? Who knows? How will this change or add to his life as he matures? Again, who knows? This was a short story, not a novel.

PAULA and I liked it.

     leah

Comment by Cathy on 07/02/03
It is painful and disgusting to see a role of mother being reduced to provoke or worse propagate TG themes. Get better in imagination- Sorry.

Comment by PAULA on 07/02/03
a truely sweet story. What a lovely mother he has to make the twins truely twins.



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