yet another read through Wow and I just finished reading 50 shades of grey - - - - -

This is a very, very bad story!
It's disgusting. Shame on you!
Silvia.

Just had to read this one again - mmmmmmmmmmm

Dear Miss Anne,

You wrote this story in a very exciting fashion.

I'm a fully, Submissive Housemaid/husband to my Mistress/Wife. She's sleeping, as I write this comment. I do all the chores in Her house.

Do you have any plan to continue this story? It's been a while since you wrote it.

Yours in kind,

Missy Susan

I can see that Mistress Patti honestly loves "joanne." But, as my maid priscilla ann noted some months ago, there is a heavy price to pay for the "privelege" of wearing silks, satins and nylons and heels. "joanne" cannot simply get by looking pretty. she must serve her Mistress to the berst of her ability. As my maid said, I am a strict task Mistress and, as such, delight in disciplining my sissy at every opportunity. On the other hand, I do expect perfection and priscilla ann must pay (and she does pay dearly) when she fails to satisfy me. I think Mistress Patti needs to consider tightening the reigns, so to speak, on her "joanne."

love it, keep up the good writing.

joe/Joann believes himself lucky to be feminized then bound and gagged in front of a mirror -- and perhaps he is. However, there are those of us suffering forced feminization as pennnance for our transgressions, who are bound and gagged in all our forced feminized shame - forced to see ourselves, not as the former macho men we once were, but as the fully feminized sissy maids and playthings we have become at the hands of our former wives or girlfriends -- now our demanding Mistresses). Mistress Meredith delights in binding me tight, gagging me and forcing me to stare at myself for hours on end; after I've bveen spanked or paddled, that is. Yes, Joe/Joann may be enjoying it, but what about the rest of us?

a fantasy that had become true how i wish it was me oh for the day that would happen great first part and i look foreord to the next installment

heay! nice story.  Its very good.  In next u can add lil salon shots, and more female to join them.  lov --- hotnhardyforu

Hey! I've been playing bondage games for years too, but I've never been into whipping or being whipped. Believe it or not, there's a big difference between sexual pleasure and sadomasochistic cruelty- or at least there is for most people.

this is an interesting story, and remarkably similar to one posted on the old michelles midday break site.  the intersting part is that it was posted by me. a few name changes and maybe  the last line is new, but other than that it is word for word.

the question about how the man came to like the whip, as mentioned in the opening paragraph, both had been playing bondage games for years

otherwise thanks for the encouraging comments about what was actually  MY first storie.

anne

    Great makeover scenes- done with just a hint of dominance- no blackmail or drugs. I am curious as to the wife's motives in using the whip- or why the husband would suddenly develop a liking for it. I hope that a plausible explanation is worked into this- otherwise, it reads like it was thrown in as part of the obligatory Story Site checklist of plot points in a transformed-by-wife story. That aside, I found myself very envious of the husband.

EXCELLENT first story!  Grammer, punctuation, and sentence structure is supurb.  The dialog is well-done and realistic.  I only found one typo - "reacking" should be "reaching".

Even though it doesn't necessarily bear makings of a novel, I don't think I've ever seen a better-written short story by a new Storysite author.  I loved the content as well - it was erotic and realistic.

BRAVO!  Keep up the good work!

Hugs,
-Ami