I'm coming in pretty late in the game to make comments, but I wanted to weigh in to encourage this author.  This was a very well done story.  You said it actually happened, and I can believe that, as it has a ring of authenticity.  I take it that English is not your first language?  There are consistent sentence structure errors.  You might consider a copy editor.  Having said that, you show good skill in writing.
Angie

Wow is all I can say. I have read many stories on this and other sites, but I can't even begin to describe how this out classes those i've read by far. The way they meet all the way till the last sentence had me hooked. I wish you would get around to writing a sequel. As a fellow Authour(not of this genre) I must compliment you on the way you made me feel like I was right there in the story. again I would love to see a sequel.            <3 -chrissy

I loved the story.  I loved the characters and loved the relationship that developed between the two.  I would love to read the follow on story when it is done.

Absolutely wonderful story. When will the follow up on what happenes to Patty?

a very good story well written very few spelling mistakes well done wonderful story please writ some more soon

Absolutely wonderful…I loved all the feeling and the vulnerabilities you added to the Story…PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER!!!

I am actually writing a second time, because I did not give this story the praise that it desevres.  If you are a fan of real type stories (vs. magic) like I am, it doesnt get any better than this.  If you are a fan of young love, and the passion of first discovery, it does not get any better than this.  The authors attention to detail make the scenes very visual.  The characters are realistic and the story made me care about them. I wonder what kind of experiences they had after the story.  The last sentence hints at more to come. I'll say in advance that the next story can't possibly equal the first. But I anxiously await more because the first story was a grandly moving experience.  

This is a great great story.  I hope the author has some more to share with us.  I would also be very interested in a follow up on what happened to Patty, even if it was not such an exciting story as this.  Thanks a million for sharing this great story.