GO769v There is certainly apparently quite a bit to realize about this.  I suppose you made some superior points in characteristics also.

glOqjk Very good post. I will be experiencing many of these issues as well..

AuSR2k Utterly   indited  articles ,  regards  for information.

KETCjx Say, you got a nice post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

find a sharp knife after tieing her up, a bolt cutter for the locks, cut off all those clothes & throw her ass out for going overboard on a simple 1 day bet & hope you never see her again because you obviously did'nt know her well enough !!

WOW, Love it. Just make sure you add the other chapters

Great story please finish it

pZsnod Thanks so much for the article post.Really thank you! Really Great.

gN8ICL Major thankies for the article post.Much thanks again. Cool.

good story needs completing

really enjoyed ths story where oh where is the mext instalment?

this is very good,.. we need a sequel, please!?

I LIKED IT.. MORE PLEASE  LOVE YOU..

I LIKED IT.. MORE PLEASE

Mercy me, I'm breathless at wondering what insurance Laura has in store. The beginning is fun, and well written.

Really neat start to a story, but too bad the rest didn't come.  If you want, it is never too late to continue.

Great start, but it has been eight years waiting for part two. Too bad

great intro,but...

brilliant story where is the next part please

The first part is great! We have been waiting for the rest of the story. Bring her on!

Loved your story. As a lot of the others have commented, where is the next installment? This story has a lot of potential, and I for one, would like to see where this goes.
Yes, "Revenge is Sweet", and you have made your boyfriend into a really sweet person.
Please continue with the story and satisfy all of us who have waited for almost seven years to hear more about this adventure.

I have re read this story but would like to read the next part of this it was brilliant i want to know how far that she will go well done more please

Great start of a story, good details...please continue

i thought the first installment was a brilliant way of getting revenge what a great set up hopfully part two will be even better but this one has a wonderfull start well written and enjoyable whata revenge plan cant wait for the next installment more please

I love the first installment, can't wait for the next one. I have always wanted to wear a corset and be someones maid. I have accomplished that through you. Thank you.

Dear Kacey,

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It is well written. Although the storyline is often used, you have brought new life to it. The lines that you wrote have been in my dreams for years. I hope that this won't be like, "The Lady or The Tiger," and leave the reader, "hanging." Unless of course, you are now, "The Maid," and are not permitted to write anymore.

Susan

Great sroty so far, please continue with this peace of your work as I for one am looking forword to the next part.

Great start, please continue your work

excellent begining for this story I look foreward to the next instalment

Very interesting introduction,but come on! You need to continue.The storyline is great, just needs to expand and show him being put through his paces.

Fantastic story - pretty much along the lines of my ideal fantasy. I can only hope for part two...

Wonderful story. I dream of my wife treating me that way!

A nicely written story that I enjoyed taking the time to read. I know it's been awhile since the author has posted still, I hope she continues with it.
I like the idea of a guy being somewhat forced into this sort of feminization. And with his loss of a bet I see no reason why he shouldn't have to pay off by being the maid his wife had to be when she had lost her bet.
The author can take this plot in many different directions, I don't know where she will end up with it but, I'm sure if she does continue with it, it will be fine with me. I liked her style or writing.

I loved the story and will be waiting for part two. I was also trained by my girlfriend and I would have it no other way.

I too loved the story and hope that you find it in yourself to write the next part in the very near future.  Although the man went a bit too willingly to meet his fate, and although the "revenge" factor was a bit weak as he never did anything that would seemingly cause her to act as she is now doing, I'd love to be in the very same situation as he is now in by a woman who intended to keep him feminized and under her firm control.

loved your story, wish it was me in the maids outfit. Please write the second chapter, harriett-cd from calif

Iloved this.best story on site I need my wife to do this!!!

This is very well written ,  and the  story  is well organized for a sequel.