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Paying Off Money Owed to the Mob 2
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Akiko on 09/28/10
Very loving story. I loved how you did not not get into to much detail about every little thing and yet  Kept the feeling in the story very much alive.
Very good work here.
Sweet Dreams

Comment by Night Wolf on 09/21/03
I'm surprised that I am the first to ask but when will part three come out?  This is a really good one to be a series.  It seemed to go a little faster then what I may have wanted but it was nicely done.  I truly think you are one of the writers on this site. And would love to see more stories from you here or even have some of these turn into books!  Unforently I stayed up a lot longer then I normally would have, but it's beacause I can't stop reading something I love so even if I am the only one who asks when you get the idea to continue I hope you will cause this is a truly wonderful second part but feel that there's got to be at least a third!



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