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Wonder how the bitches will feel when John grows some balls and pours acid over the sister and mothers faces?

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I'm sorry.  I tried to read this story, but it is just to much. It almost made me physically ill to read such cruelty.

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It was a plausible story, however,the allowance of a mother to take such a permanent damage on her her son was horrible. If teaching a boy of the gentler side of femininity could teach him a lesson that would carry over for the rest of his life, the story would be more likable. However, the overly vengeful daughter and submitting mother puts this in the criminal and destructive range. Accept for that portion it is likable.

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Describing this story as anything but disturbing is disengenuous. The real bulwark of this gendre is to suggest that guys acting like guys is wrong and disgusting while girls acting like guys is victorious living. I agree with just about every negative thing said about this story. I agree with the sentiment that the suicide was misplaced and wrongly motivated. There is sometimes a thin line between punishment and revenge but this girl was more than transparent enough that the mother should not only have recognized the damage she was doing but would have taken action to stop it.

I loved the story!  Awesome!  I would love to be John!

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This is my type of story. If only I had been luky enough to have a sister like Sally. Megan was great too!

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I loved this story. Too much in fact. This story is really messed up. Actually, I love this story so much that I hate it. The cruel actions of the sister and mother and how John was "killed" will forever haunt me. I am not a sissy, but I feel this cruelty for John's memory is too dark for this site. I wish I could just abandon this site forever.

I thought that this story was very sweet, albeit a bit unrealistic, but hey, it's fiction. The epilogue, however, was quite dark and didn't quite work with the rest of the story. However, I think that it was very well-written. Good job!

WoW, a powerful story,.. many themes and rythms,.. I was totally engrossed,.. the last chapter had me bawling like a baby, feeling sissy/john's pain at having to revert back to being a boy,.. the storyline was genius,.. tied together very well,.. Please write more of the similar magnitude,.. sigh, wish I had a caring sister like Sawwy,..:0-}

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Reading some of the stories on this site makes me wonder about my sanity.
How many of you believe this kind of vomit?

How sick do you think a family would need to be to behave this way?
I gave up reading it at the first chapter then i went to the last to see the end.

The suicide is the only 'normal' thing i saw in this story.

This story was so sick.
It tells a lot about those enjoying it.
And writing it to.

I seriously doubt that trans gendered people enjoys this kind of defamation.
I would say that it definitely falls under sadomasochism.
And to present such regurgitations as something remotely near life?

Sh*

Yoron.

I have to agree with them sugar, I'm glad that there was the suicide attempt, but for all the wrong reasons. Hun, what he did was wrong yes. What he got in return was mind-raped.

They totally tortured him into being what they wanted, then berated him for turning into their own creation. Honestly, the suicide attempt should have come a lot sooner.

I know this is fantasy sugar, but don't forget that your readers start empathizing with character's, and if the reader's are empathizing with the so-called 'villain' (the son in this case) then maybe it's time for you to step back and say 'whoa, where did I go wrong here?'

I personally started hoping that the son would off himself or be permanently scarred. He didn't even receive a 'sorry we destroyed you'. Now I promised myself I'd never do this, but...I'm going to break that promise this one time.

I suggest you re-think your ending to be something both darker and more foreclosing. Because frankly, they got away with murder and seem to be relieved by this fact.

I'm not angry at you sugar, just your characters okay?
/hug.
Be safe and please consider my words.

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hey guys and gals, lets all remember this is just a story.No real life message, whats that about... well, I fo one like the first few parts. but when it go to the  undeline cd messages it went way off base for me.. I am not one that usually reads multiple part stories, but, the first 3 or 4 parts was interesting, comical, fantasy, the last should have beed left on the typewriter.

Loved part 1, brilliant story telling style. Unfotunatly it lost focus after that. But thanks for a fun read

Ive gotten through about half of it, but im already losing interest.  While it has a decently strong premise, its just progressing to unrealistically, too quickly, and too severe.  No mother in her right mind would go along with that. What about other relatives to watch them both, as its obvious both are more than irresponsible for their own actions?  Does a girl who knows how to fight, really take on such aggressive testosterone induced behavior?  Even if she knew martial arts, are not guys, especially if a couple years older and or bigger a tad stronger than that?  Maybe he would lose to such a girl, but would it really be that easy to turn such a rough roguish guy into a girl?  And if they had been fighting so much in the past, would not she have beaten him up earlier? or he her, or he even learn his own martial skills to defend himself or even pick up any of her tricks?  

It does not sound like the fights, even if there was yelling and name calling were all that severe.  And why on earth would he only steal one thing from the house and buy one bag of dope?   Someone that used to it, i mean he did not cough or anything, would have been doing that for far longer and have bought more than one bag over that time, so more thins would have been missing.  The guy could easily have driven a car, he was old enough, she was not, run out, called cops, or anything to defend himself.  The level of desparation seems to fall a little flat here.   Also, in general, i dont like stories where even relatives abuse, humiliate and call another relative names like that.  Most people grow out of doing that to their own and usually parents dont or dont that severely, at least, not ones without a criminal record or a long history of screwed up geneology.  This story seems to lack a level of cohesion, suspension of disbelief, belief, anything resembling realism, anything resembling typical or acceptable behavior, for any of the characters, and lacks justification, or any sense of genuine caring of the family members on any side.

eh, ill read other stories.  

<<  After John had been put to bed for the night, Kate said to Sally "You know, with the way you're treating him, when this is all over, he's probably going to wet the bed every night again."  "Good," said Sally. "It'll serve him right."  >>

AC/DC, "Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap":  Sadistic sister Sally may have done the deeds, but evil mom has to bear the responsibility for everything including the the suicide attempt and the erasure of her son and his replacemen by Chrissy.  She knew early on that Sally was doing things that would make the punishment last longer than the summer and she did nothing to stop her.  (I did notice that Sally's policy of honesty with mom went out the window when it came to the subliminal tapes; she didn't tell her about those.)  AND, After the suicide attempt, why wasn't the therapy given John to bring him back to being a normal boy?   In the end, in effect,  John was murdered by his own sister and mom.

I like the story and the idea of total humiliation.  Would it be better for the son if he had a dose of realism for drug possession and theft; prison and probably rape?

He lets this happen to him.  He is old enough to run away from home and survive on his own.  His sister is tough and a bit of a sadist, he is a complete sissy.

As for the complaints; get a grip.  This is provacative fiction and a fantasy; perhaps a bit dark, but a fantasy all the same.

sissy jeannie

This is a SISSY sexual fantasy more than a story. It holds no realism, no lesson or message, it is just a total subjugation and humiliation of a boy by a girl that has martial arts as her weapon.

Yes, the boy did wrong, but the girl and the mother were the real criminals here. And to top it off, the author had the audacity to try and make things right by that nightmare of an epilogue!

Cruelty to others is OK, might is right! Total humiliation, subjugation, mind manipulation, everything is OK! BULL, this was one screwed up family and one screwed up fantasy!

This belongs at Betty's Pub!

I'm surprised to see it here at Crystal's, just goes to show us that if it contains a boy wearing girls clothes, anything goes in this genre. To bad really, this belongs on the SISSY FETISH sites, not on a TG Fiction site.

Angel

Absolute rubbish. Characterize this monster as a level headed, even nice girl and then set her upon her brother in that way, unbelievable. And what about the mother, telling her vicious daughter she wasn't allowed to hurt the boy then closing her eyes to a monstrous crime throughout the summer. I have no idea why someone would even fantasize in this way, it is beyond sick.

As a sissy myself I like these kind of stories of forced feminisation and babyfication. The trouble is that they can also make me feel a bit sad and sick. This old one did too (I have read it somewhere before) as the punishments for poor Sissy went far beyond the original crime (drugs and stealing). And I have never really liked situations where a mother just lets someone totally humiliate her son. And not even noticing that sister was driving the process even further (and then in the last parts sister did not even realize that what she did would change Sissy permanently having wanted permanent changes before). Mothers reaction to Sissy's wish to remain (a girl or a sissy - not certain) a she was, was rather extreme for a person who had willfully accepted that her son is turned into her daughter. A good cop - bad cop compination would have been better in my opinion.

Also the end with a happy Christa wasn't too believable. After suicide and clear gender problems caused by his own family Sissy would have been taken into foster care and his mother would have gone to jail. It would have been more realistic - if dark - to have ended the story with suicide.

Writing and details are superb and the weak sissy part in my liked the idea of "toddlertalk". Also the basic idea of a stronger little sister is always a good one.

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)