Very enjoyable + hope there will be more.

I don't know who is having more fun: Ms. Crawford, Heidi or Margaret. But, Maria/Suzette is certainly in a heap of trouble -- waitress by night/maid by day with no less that three strong-willed women to heighten her humiliation. Lovely and well-told, Ms. Staphanie.

Having to dress and work as a sexy waitress would be torment for any former macho man and a complete joy for those women that put him/her in that position. Having to serve as a waitress and then a maid is even greater humiliation. I hope you do more on this story. It's great.

Why did you never finish this story?  It's been a long time since there've been ANY updates and it's a story I hate to see left hanging!

Sally,
I just loved part four and it appears that Mark is on his way to becoming a full fledged Suzette.  Let's hear how he takes on becoming more woman each day.  Perhaps she will get really into it and start making more money than the other girls.  Cleavage doesn't  hurt and he starts to observe how his  fellow waitresses are  accumulating  their loot.  Pure sex appeal. Jealously will win and he just might come out on top with nothing a deep cleavage to offer as  excuse.   Maybe he will also  start to enjoy those fabulous ass splaps from the boys.  Have fun with our new girl.

Sally,

I've been looking for the sequel, and am not disappointed by #4. Nicely done. You continue to tell an entertaining story that has an inner drive and restrains from becoming too fanciful. I find it full of surprises and multi-dimensional characters. The game of lipstick pick-up was a nice change from more vulgar forms of embarassment that you could have chosen to describe, and are typically found in other stories. I find that your way of telling the story of male dominance conveys the intention to inflict cruelty and mental pain much better than the thoughtless grabbing of a breast would have. Your writing is delightfully different, subtle, powerful.

My only quibble is, that as Mark is such a jerk, how does he rate all of this attention from some apparently nice people? He has received considerable kindness, yet returns little. Will he always be a self-centered jerk? Or, is the moral here that being a jerk has its rewards? His helping his co-worker clean up in the washroom seemed quite out of character for him. Maybe he has a glimmer of humanity in him, but why are all of these people bothering to give him a chance? If they wanted to "punish" him, they could just leave him alone to go through life as the jerk they first encounter.

Thank you again for a very entertaining, well-told, interesting tale. Really hope you find the inspiration to continue on with this.

after part 4
Well, Mark seems resigned; I hope he actually gets in the spirit , tries "her" best at work, and eventually comes to like being Maria/Suzette.  Margaret seems like she really does like Mark and will treat him nicely as long as he goes along with her feminization of him.  I'm looking forward to part 5.

I read Parts 1, 2, & 3 today. I really enjoyed them, and hope you provide more. The story has a nice pace, and has so far avoided cliches. You've set a very high standard for the rest of the story! Based on reading this story, I want to eventually read your earlier contributions, too.

Thank you!

after part 3:
I am still enjoying this, and I sense that Mark/Maria is at a real turning point, a point at which he  could learn his lesson and resolves to take his punishment like ... a woman, eventually coming to like it and earning the girls' respect for the new her.  OR he could continue feeling sorry for himself, refuse to learn anything, with the girls turning completely against him and finding new ways to humiliate him.

 I know many readers would enjoy the latter; I hope I am not the only one who would enjoy the former.  Femininity, for someone who is not naturally endowed with it, is such a wonderful gift; I would love to see Maria embrace it and realize its worth.  Maybe Patricia, because she wants to have things run smoothly at the bar and also because she sees some hope for "her", could have a heart  to heart chat to help misogynist asshole Mark turn the corner to sweet, cooperative, feminine, nice girl Maria.

MY GOD! Is this WONDERFUL! Every part is getting better and I cannot wait for what comes next.  You are indeed one of the vital and bright new voices on this site!

A very enjoyable story that I could not stop reading once I'd begun with Part I this morning.

Sally Stephanie writes very well and it is refreshing to discover another who has mastered the needed skills to present a work with only the minor errors we are all guilty of.

I highly recommend this story to others. Do continue, please?

Ta-ra, fer a bits,
Karen Anne

The first two parts are going well.  The topic reminds me of the lawsuit against Hooter's Restaurant/Bar some time back where a guy sued them because they wouldn't hire him as a waiter.  Hopefully Mark will get the full humiliation of being feminized and dominated.  I especially like the addition of Margaret, his neighbor as an addition to the humiliation by the ladies at the bar.  Please keep this story going.

Sally Steph, you are fast becoming one of my absolute favorite writers on this site.  I love workplace forced TG and few, except for Denise Em and at FM, Becky Marie and Michelle X, do it as well.  Bet you could do a terrific boss-gets-demoted to fem secretary story. I love the loss of power angles as well as the dressing.

Keep up the INCREDIBLE work!

    Ah my dear Sally!

    Once again you have hit on a powerful subject.  This is one I feel that has bee sorely neglected!  Too many males think they can get away with the nonsense.  You have the correct scenario begun.  Maintain the totality of the equality and you will win this one big.
I do not see Nine's thoughts as viable.  She is comp[lying to the letter of the law in all aspects of the male's demanding employment.  He is being furnished exactly the same uniform as ALL other employees. How can he object.  If Nine thinks the customers will rebel, that is not as likely as he could possibly thinj\k.  In such an environment, the man would not be able to object and woul have to do his very best to fit in or be laughed right off the job for his insensitiveness.

    As I see it, you have a great read here and I want...demand(?) to see more.  keep  your skirts down and your knickers up Mr Andrews!

Hugs and all that good stuff,

Misty

I see a slight problem.  The guy still looks like a guy, right?  Would this women risk the business of her leering male patrons by having them be served by a guy in drag instead of a buxom woman?

Love it!
He needs to be helt to his/ contrack, and sissefied totaly.
Some female hormones & a casteration, would be nice.
I am a Sub. tv myself, and would like to get castered by  a Dom.woman.
any body want to?

Yes, the plot is a tad transparant but the writing is good and the story moves right along. This has the making of a nice continuation. Certainly this will cure Mark of making nasty insuations at bar "girls". I'm looking anxiously to part 2.

Good story - though the plot is a little transparent, given where it is posted. I liked it, but, thought the end was a little clipped. Perhaps a second part could be added to detail Maria's tribulations in "her" new life. (Or maybe how "she" tries to fight against the system??)

I liked this.  I hope there is a part 2.  I would like to see him, after trials and tribulation, of course, eventually cured of his mysoginist attitudes and come to enjoy his work and be a good girl staff member.