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Pea Pod
by Wholeman

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Comment by Saksham on 01/08/13
I am toatlly wowed and prepared to take the next step now.

Comment by solon on 06/02/03
woo hoo! Quite the lil tale this one! I like the 'jungle cure' for fainting spells, as there's no doubt the cure would work! The story is too loosely constructed for my taste, and a few of the premises (the aliens need of Doog for example) seem like something the cat brought home....but it's a likeable easy read. The writer needs to invest more in future stories though, if the objective is more then laughter.
pyyrdy cat

Comment by Paula on 04/02/03
entertaining story. A little long for my story taste but enjoyable.



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