briliant story more please

great story more please punishment to fit the crime

It is probably not fair to read stories written for the same target age over a wide period of time one after the other...
Names changed to protect the not so innocent, and that's about it?

Thanks for the courtesy of your reply, Jennifer. I'm particularly interested in the genre of mackintosh fiction. Have you posted such stories that you haven't posted here? Jimmy's adventures in particular were a pleasure to read - any further adventures to report?

Thanks in anticipation of hearing from you soon

Ronny

Hi Ronny. No, the stories I've had posted on this web site are by no means all the ones I've written, merely those that I think suit this particular genre.

Thank you for another wonderful story. I would be interested to learn whether this site contains your full body of work?

Short and all complete
A humilation replete
With a long walk in knickers
Acompanied by snickers
At his red faced defeat.

Great story, hope you will write more stories along this line.

Thanks for a great story Jennifer. It's always more fun if you can imagine the events are really possible.

Thanks very much for that Eric. I've asked Crystal to change 'David Turner' to 'Mike Taylor'. As somebody once said, the person who never makes a mistake never makes anything! But thanks again.

Uh, he's David Turner at the beginning of the story and Mike Taylor at the end...