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The Perfect Disguise
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Comment by Francis Kanneh on 12/02/21
I wish that you had a proper part three four and five and six so that we could see how this story ends. I also like the fact that you decided to make Katie the catalyst for wearing girls clothes and then she was still attracted to him even dressed as a girl. Comment by Francis Kanneh on 06/10/21 I would have loved more interaction between Katie and Colin after they had left for the day. Also, I really enjoyed hearing about Colin needing to climax after putting on his girlfriend’s underwear. It was a great story with suspense and drama, but it still needs a part three. It was a great read and I regularly come back to this story for fun. Thanks for creating such fantastic work. Hoping for more content in the future. Comment by Lorelei on 12/30/12 Say, has anyone yet noticed the similarity between this story and Bobbie Taylor's "School Daze"? I like both. I personally think EVERY boy should experience wearing a crisp, cute, sweet, girly English or Japanese schoolgirl's uniform at least once in his life. It would give his legs a little freedom and provide him with a feeling of classy, dainty vulnerability. Comment by Silvia. on 08/19/11 Don't you'll finish the story? Comment by robert on 12/07/09 You need to finish this story, you can't leave everyone hanging over the cliff without knowing what happened to Colin. Did he dress-up again, did he go and perform at school, did his mother wind-up seeing him crossdressed after nearly getting caught. These are things the readers need to know. Comment by TeriLynn on 12/02/09 I like your stoies. but it's a real bummer for there are no parts 3,4,or 5 etc., to this to find out colin's fate in all three storie's. please write extra part's to your stoies and write some more book's thank you. Comment by juliej on 09/20/09 great story but we need a 3/4 part to continue the excitment is a brill story Comment by Todd on 12/13/08 i like your stoies it's a real bummer no part 3-4-5 to this to find out colin's fate in all three storie's write exstra part's to your stoies and write some more book's thankyou. p.s. ware can i buy your book's todd carnis pobox21515 columbia hight's/minnesota55421 Comment by sonia on 03/16/08 good one Comment by Nomura Yuki on 03/15/08 Very Good, i like a lot ^^ |
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