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Comment by Karik on 12/13/11
Great post with lots of ipmotrant stuff. Comment by Rone Welles on 08/31/09 Loved this story ... you done good ... fun and interesting Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/16/09 I can't believe this was written in 2001 and I just read it for the first time. What a wonderful story. No coercion, no humiliation, no shame. Great! I'd like to read about Hannah's return. Comment by WannabeGinger on 06/19/08 He just HAD to end up champagne blonde..... what a lucky guy!!!! Nicely written - a trace of possibility....... where's the follow-up... I agree... you can't leave us hanging on like this! Comment by Night Wolf on 05/31/03 I have to agree this story isn't complete you left us hanging with Pete becoming Hanah again. Though it's been awhile you should think about the next story and answering the question Will Pete do it again? And maybe tell us more about how Holly took things as she also found out! Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/22/02 Emmie, this is another fantastic story. But it is only the beginning. Hannah has had an invitation to join a real girls band and a real job. Will Pete take another vacation, and will Hannah resurface and take this job? I certainly hope so. Comment by Tigger on 01/16/01 Every once in a while you come across a work that is so refreshingly different, you are momentarily at a loss as to how to handle that. Comment by J.Scott on 01/16/01 Loved the story. I'm a musician, and I wish I could have joined a group in that way ! Thanks. Comment by J.Scott on 01/16/01 Loved the story. I'm a musician, and I wish I could have joined a group in that way ! Thanks. Comment by Nellie D on 01/15/01 Another very good story from the pen ..er.. computer of Emmie Dee. The interview format was different but interesting and did hold the reader. Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/15/01 Simply lovely Comment by Jim on 01/15/01 Excellent !!!!!!! |
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