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Perfecting Leon
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Donnie on 01/10/10
Another winner!

Comment by Don(na?) on 10/18/06
Another great story...

Comment by willow on 10/17/04
You often write stories that excite me and this is one of them. You are so prolific that I am amazed that there are so few errors that betray the need for an editor.

Basically, I love role reversal and transformation stories that address a change in sexual need, physical fertility and nurturing roles for males forced to live in a new world.  Throw in a little light humiliation as the former males realize thier new station in life and you will always get my attention.  Few have gotten my attention who post here, as often as you have.

Love
Willow

Comment by jk on 10/15/04
Can always count on Jennifer for a little ditty from time to time. This is not one of the best but still o.k.

Thanks for what you write for us.

Comment by Paula on 10/10/04
a wonderful tale with an interesting unexpected ending

Comment by Early June on 10/10/04
This is your most diabolical yet!  A good tale. Very scary. Poor guy, er girl that is, may have to resort to destructive means to maintain some control.  However, being unfaithful right before the wedding doesn't ellicit any asympathy from me.

Comment by Max on 10/10/04
Powerful, hypnotic story, a good touch was she a srong rreason to do it - his inflidelity right beforee their marriage. I wonder if Canace will lose hersself in him and take up his buds!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/10/04
Leon's reached the "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose." point.  Is there a large sharp knife in the kitchen?   Change is good; Candice goes first.



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