J89XM5 Thanks again for the article post. Keep writing.

Enjoyed the story but staggered that it goes no further, I would have expected that you would finish it.

rBn1Fa I really like and appreciate your post.Thanks Again. Great.

hfWeRP Thanks for the article post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

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5JfzDN I really like and appreciate your post. Keep writing.

This is a very very good story.  I am disappointed that you have not posted the rest. It has been three yrs since your last post and I think it is very unfair of you to keep us waiting sooooo Long! :P

I hope you have not forgotten about this or have decided not to finish it. I would really like to read more of your work.

Ok so now I've read it.

Some points though.

I'm not happy when the hero(ines) acts like judge jury and executor towards people that have done them nothing, like that guy that got transformed.
A very bad move to my taste as it is not a ethical thing to do.

Actually it places them right beside those slave handlers they are so concerned about.
It also destroy all credibility I gave this piece before saying it contained love faith and care (my first post).

Other than that I like the literary style and I recognize some ideas from books I've read before :)
But hey, it would be almost impossible not to find references as there already exist so much SF/Fantasy.

All in all It's a good, even if somewhat too bloodthirsty, piece of work :)
I would prefer to allow those credited with slavery to kill each other off instead, ahh, not in a 'game room' though (Demarest? :)
And our hero(ines) to behave somewhat more 'heroic' instead of being the exact same kind of thing they want to eradicate.

You know, just when you started to give up on peoples writings something like this comes along.
I haven't finished it by any means, but already to my eyes, this is a well thought out story involving love empathy and care.
Trying to manipulate others trough rudely constructed wanking pieces may be a goal for some, but I much prefer something of a literary value.
And if it incorporates love and faith it makes it so much more interesting for me.
Relations comes in many shades and colors, but without those values they are only lies.

Cheers
Yoron.

Reminds me of a cooperative story by Phillip K Dick and Later Heinlein. I see elements of Lazarus Long, The Cat Who Walked Through walls, all the gender bending Heinlein did in his later stories, the Lazarus Long being cured/Rejuvenated at a hospital Paradise is kind of obvious.

I enjoyed it, and Heinlein wouldn't have minded, you filed the serial numbers off like a pro before you sprayed it (Black with gold metal flake I hope).

Jolly Good Show, you should try to sell it!

Phillip K Dick I see in the subject matter,and the matter of fact way you handled it, Heinlein was a product of an early 20th century Missouri Baptist upbringing, and it shows in his stories, a sort of aura, like "HOLY CRAP, I can't believed I can Write this stuff!". A bit of a prude, I think.

I enjoyed this story very much.

Keep up the good work, as I can not wait untill the next chapter.

Susan

The continuing story is quite grand !!!  The Sci-fi aspects and the humor make for a great read.

seems there will be several more chapters necessary to complete this tale. i'm looking forward to them.

Thanks for the view from your minds eye...

I found the stories through the Author List.  Apparently not updated through clicking on the author directly on the Date summary page.

I see in the update the next 3 chapters, but when I come to the page where the story is, they are not there.   Don't know if you realize it.

Thanks for the work you do on this site.

TJ

Congratulations!!   I am glad to see the story to continue on.  Apparently some real life got in the way.  You have really made this one to span the centuries, literally!!   Obviously more chapters to come.  Don't be too long for the next set.   Excellent writing in keeping us in suspense with those "probablies".  hah, hah.  We do not where David comes from, or other mysteries of the universe you created here.  How many years in the future in relation to our current year?   David could be anyone from the past.  Perhaps plucked up from our world as a baby and was transformed and he is chosen for a great event that is going to happen soon.  Witnessing the world events as a historian.   But it is your story, you know the plot, I am only guessing.  You got me glued to the seat for the next chapter.  Thanks again for all of your stories, they are well written.  hmmm... A matriarchial world.   Kind of like Cheyenne Moon's stories about The Isle of Maxxis.  I love it.  May the world become so, but it is in our dreams right now.

HI enjoyed this story.  I wish you would finish the story off. Please try and find time to complete it

Good story as far as it goes. I deffinately want to read th conclusion. There are several typo's, a few missing and/or missplaced.
Still a great story. loved it.

Good story as far as it goes. I deffinately want to read th conclusion. There are several typo's, a few missing andor missplaced.
Still a great story. loved it.

Good story as far as it goes. I deffinately want to read th conclusion. There several typo's, a few missing andor missplaced.
Still a great story. loved it.

Dear Dave:

   Please fill us in on what happens next! I had lost track of this story for several months and am glad I finally found it again. Very sharp original and totally pleasing.  The playful relationship between Katherine and David is so very rewarding, as is their true love. There are a few typos but so what? Your writing style is nice and easy and reads very fast. Your story is all in all an absolute gem.  Pretty please would you write some more?

   Hugs,

   Kristi

It appears you have paused in this story to attend other story lines for different stories.  Please do not forget this one. Interesting perspective for the future.  It is well written.  The future of the human race is a debate that will unfold as time goes on.  

Hey Dave ,
I still like how your story "Matron" is going . Hope you will continue soon. As I look everyday to see if a new chapter is posted.
Go on .. Greetings Tony

Dave, I like what you have posted so far, did you opt to not post the rest until later, or is this the end of the writing ?

This is a wonderful story. i really enjoyed reading it so far. Please tell me that there's more. this story has plenty of scope for expansion. huggles from prue

Just finished part 6 and as usual really enjoyed your story, Thanks :)
I hope David removes the slave conditioning, or maybe there is some other way that a slave could feel safe after having that done to them? Seems to me the whole government and slavery has to be removed. What can replace it though?
I am looking forward to the next chapters Thanks again.  

really good story, please carry it on!

Please don't stop here - continue.  I'm enjoying this story and wondering where it is going.
Thanks.

Thoroughly enjoying your story. Thanks

I love the storys they are great

Great story so far.  Looking forward to other chapters.

Thank you so much for writing it.

I really enjoyed the first chapters and i'm eager to read more... hugs, mj

Your story look good, and I'd like to see more, but you're running a little behind on posting. Any idea when more segments will appear?--Nicole2

Better and better, I hope they keep their love strong and are happy.
Thanks for part 2, tomorrow can't come soon enough :)

Nice ! I really enjoyed the first part, and am looking forward to the rest of the story. I just wish Crystal would post the whole thing a once!

wow, a great start, i can't wait to see what happens, please dont keep usnwaiting too long:)

I love it so far. Please continue the fine work.

A fun first part, I am looking forward to the next installment :)