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Comment by Jacqui on 03/19/15
I really liked your writing style, clear concise prose and good character dialog. Stories of this ilk bring back strong memories of myself at Larry's age when my mother discovered my stash of Sandy Thomas books and my girly clothes I had salvaged from the rag bag. She actually threatened, that if I didn't stop wearing girls clothes she would send me to live with my mean great aunt Dorothy who would make me wear girls clothes all the time. The combination of fear and humiliation brought tears to my eyes which she misconstrued as contrition, and she did not follow through with her wonderous promise. There were many spots in this series that brought those same tears to my eyes. Comment by Annabelle Raven on 05/16/12 I hope someday we could see a 4th chapter following the heroines progress. Let Mona become as much of a woman as Laura so they can truly mother and daugter and eventually have men in their lives! Comment by samantha on 03/28/06 reread this story again and it brought tears of joy to me as i am a ts as well Comment by slimv on 09/12/04 Loved the story. Wonderfully well written. It is a shame Laura's guardians had to be nazi and make her quit smoking though. Comment by Lynn on 11/29/03 I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES. THEY ARE ALL VERY ENJOYABLE WITH A NICE TOUCH OF HUMOR AND NO TRASH SEX TALK.. Comment by chrisl on 03/30/03 Hi Hebe, Comment by ANOTHER BRIAN on 03/15/03 THANK YOU THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND A GOOD READ ALL ON ITS OWN. HOWEVER MUCH LIKE "ROUND TRIP" IT BEGS FOR MORE. YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER AND PROVE THAT TOP TRANSGENDER FICTION DOES NOT HAVE TO GO FOR THE "X" RATINGS TO SUCCEED. Comment by Annie O on 03/14/03 Like the others, I feel the story is incomplete! Will yhere be a sequel -- I'm waiting to see how Larry makes out in Fl. Comment by Nora-Adrienne Deret on 03/13/03 I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I just feel that is ended on a short unfinished note. We have no idea whether Laura ever makes it to grandmother's house, no idea of Mona's fate, and we are left feeling like someone took the food off the table before we finished eating. Please, could you finish the story? Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 03/13/03 GREAT STORY! Just when you think there are no new TG fiction plots, bang-o! Thanks, Hebe. However, this story is listed as complete, yet ends before we get to the bad boy to good girl parts. And what happens to Mona? I assume the "complete rating was an error? Comment by Pervette on 03/12/03 High, very high marks for originality: a situation unparallelled in Comment by Andrea Foster on 03/12/03 Another excellent "different" story from Hebe. A good plot and engaging characters. Even the dodgy father was drawn in a surprisingly sympathetic manner. |
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