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A Pink and White Dress
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Comment by Mariah on 05/11/13
Nice story Janet, it appears that mom was the driving force behind this story, right from the 1st paragraph it was alleged punishment but what for? Carolyn was innocent but we still don't know what she was accused of doing that warranted such punishment. All things considered this was another wonderful story. Comment by Luckie on 12/15/11 This artlice keeps it real, no doubt. Comment by Aleesha on 05/14/10 You tell so sweet stories Janet. I have never disliked one of them. My theory is that if more teenage boys wore female clothing they would simply adore the clothing. Women have it made wearing such exiting clothing. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/28/07 Poor guy gets stuck as Carolyn because Mom believes he is guilty. Carol's journey into womanhood is non-stop as Mom's wish for a daughter is granted. Carols Best friend accepts the new girl too. I just wish that Carol had the joy of marrying her true love. Janet, I laughed through out this story as Carol kept on proving her womanhood. st Comment by juliej on 07/17/07 a good sweet story with the help of his mother became a female great story Comment by rone welles on 05/15/07 Well some of us like stories that a professor has us write .. Comment by Alyssa Davis on 05/19/01 Another excellent story. No magic, no sci-fi, just a simple, well written piece. Comment by erica lynn on 05/14/01 a very nice story maybe fantasy but yet believeable kudos erica lynn Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/14/01 A truely sweet tale. Like the twist that it was the mother idea more than the kids. |
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