intresting story revenge is sweet

I found it quite interesting, and as always, enjoyed your technique.  But, the motivations of the siren and her co-conspirators bewilder me. What did they get out of this?  I thought there would be black-male payments but apparently not.  Jeanette's reactions were interesting.  Is this Michael Burke based on the one that used to run the Yankees?  Or is it supposed to be Donald Trump?  Anyway, I enjoyed it.

Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Pet Peeve department:  Please learn the difference between silicon and silicone.  The fluid filling medical implants is a silicone, NOT silicon.

Silicon is the second most abundant element in the earth's crust, comprising around 28% of it. It is not found in its elemental form but occurs mainly as oxides and silicates. In contrast to carbon, silicon-silicon bonds are uncommon. Natural silicon-carbon bonds are extremely rare but they can be created synthetically.

Silicones are synthetic polymers and are not therefore found naturally. They have a linear, repeating silicon-oxygen backbone akin to silica. However, organic groups attached directly to the silicon atoms by carbon-silicon bonds prevent formation of the three-dimensional network found in silica. These types of compound are also known as polyorganosiloxanes. Certain organic groups can be used to link two or more of these silicon-oxygen backbones and the nature and extent of this crosslinking enables a wide variety of products to be manufactured. The most important materials used in medical implants are fluids, gels and rubbers (elastomers) whose physical and chemical properties include, amongst others, a high degree of chemical inertness, thermal stability and resistance to oxidation.

I really liked the concept of this story, and it certainly worked out for "HIM"; he became the perfect he-female.  However, if I'd have been him, I would have used some of my wealth to get even with the women who had done this - it's not the feminization; it's the forcing, the violation of his rights.  

For a story about a sex change for a "girl" who is not transsexual and will always have the mind of a man -- your story makes sense.

I cannot imagine how a man thinks, but I kinda believe it is probably like you described and a non-transsexal would still think along the same lines.  She, having the body of a woman, could become reconciled to being a female and marry just for companionship.

A good story and refreshing because of the content.  I liked it.