its interesting story a bit short more could be done but overall good thank you

No compassion, no empathy, a story about humiliation.
And whats worse, boring.

Cheers
Yoron.

a geat start to a good story the begining is very good its amazing how things work out a lesson to be learnt the hard way and it will proberbly longer than the week welldone next part please

alovely start to the story,I hope pip becomes  a lovely girl  ,wish i had an aunt like that when i was young full marks so far

    I agree with Sissy demi that this is a very good start to the story, but I disagree with her about Pip seeing future things as  humiliation.  
     I like the fact that Pip has decided to take his punishment like a man and hope he learns to take it like a girl and view what his aunt and Estelle have in store for him as learning experiences, trying to be the best young lady "she" can be, not a sissy.   I hope his aunt and Estelle appreciate his cooperative attitude and come to like Pippa.  
     I expect that Tim and Simon will be a lot less mature in accepting their punishment, and will go the slut route.  I imagine they will blame Pip and try to bully him.  I hope being Pippa gives Pip newfound confidence to stands up to them (in ladylike fashion) and win out in the end.

Very good start to the story! ^_^

I loved the scene where they were talking to him about his punishment, and how he wasn't quite sure what to expect. The clothing desriptions were nice, as were the feelings Pip had as he reacted ot each.

I look forward ot more of the sotry and really hope Pip gets even more humiliation by being seen as a boy dresed as a girl at some time (like a cute outfit but with his boy hair or something) ...