Timeless and a great story Miss Grant was a great author ...
She will be missed by many ... GOD Bless Constance.   May your lite shine forever

A really good story. Mostly believable. Now if I can only find the second part.

It's difficult, but I hope you keep writing!
Hugs.
Silvia.

A note to Molly:

From what I have seen the action part has more plausibility than you obviously think.  You would be surprised of some of the special ops missions that are conducted by all branches of the military.  You also hear more about failures in interagency cooperation than their successes - much more 'newsworthy'.  The lack of publicity for successful special ops missions might be their greatest success.  Like Jack Nicholson said much of our 'civilised' country "couldn't handle the truth."

And to Constance:

A wonderful story.  Captivating, well written, and a happy... middle.  I suppose I'm hoping for too much for the ending to get written.  You can see how old fashioned I am.  That's one of the problems with writing about preteens if you want to take the story beyond to say adulthood, you have to go fairly far into the future or back the beginning far enough into the past.

Excellent story.  Really wish the author would continue and post the next part.  Many of us wish we could write this well but can only enjoy the talent of those that can.

I loved the story.  It had me from start to finish.  It's one of the best stories I've read for quite some time.  I'll look forward to reading more if you have any to add.  Thank you for the great entertainment.  Kelly

 Still great  ....   I know you have magic fingers ...

how about you finish this with part two   and get your mind working again .   We your fans of good clean fun  ... love your stories and the way it was written .... it says  a lot about the author ...

thank you for the best I HAVE READ  sofar *****  five star rating...

Rone and the gang of wierdos .xoxooxxx  

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, until we got to the action part near the end. I have no experience in the military or in a government agency, but many of the actions described in this part just didn't ring true for me. I know it's just me, and I set the bar rather high on my suspension of disbelief, but I appreciate authors who do research or write about what they know, so that when they write about real world people doing real world things (as opposed to fantasy creatures in a parallel universe), they describe them the way people actually behave and the way their activities operate in the real world. When authors do otherwise, it feels to me like they are insulting the intelligence of their readers, and that definitely spoils my enjoyment.

PLEASE   MORE   PLEASE  MORE      PLEASE MORE  

WE ARE STARVING CHILDERN WANTING MORE KISSY   KISSY   KISSY

BEG  BEG   MORE   rone Welles  *****   THANK YOU XOXOXOXOXOXXO

  OK  when is part two comming I love this story ..you have caught my attention and the talent is there ... as well as the story telling ability ...  oh magic fingers ..thank you ...:) Rone

Love the story.  You write so well!!!!!!!!!!  Have you forgotten that your fan's are still waiting hungrily for the rest?????????????
Sharlee

This is one of the nicest stories I have ever read.  I wish Constance Grant would continue with more episondes.  There is one thing I do think there could have been more detail about.  When Michael/Michelle comes home on Saturday morning there is very little said about his newly pierced ears.  I would have added a paragraph where he stops behind a sand dune and tries to remove his earrings, but has no idea how to tkae them out.  When he gets home his mother should have made more comment about his earrings, then examined them and found he had the Teflon inserts.

loved it- i felt i was reading one of those mysteries from when i was a kid, but with the kind of twist i might have fantasizzed of myself.  

    Constance I just re-read "pirate Gold" again and I think I enjoyed it more this time than last.  Ireally wish you would consider finishing this story as I have enjoyed you tribute to "The Petticoat Detective" series, and long for it's completion.  Thank you for a well writen story so far....
                Sincerely:Rebecca Anne.

Great story!!!.............But we need More............

A great tale with a good story line. Once again I would love to know how it all ends.

Please continue this story.  Did you ever have that steak sandwish at Nevers.  The children are so adapt with a computer; maybe they could play with the scaner and make family picture for each house.