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The Plan
by Anonymous3

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Comment by Leia on 05/08/10
Love it,.. good start,.. I identified with joey right away!,..
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Comment by robert on 12/03/09
 YOU need to finish this story.  YOU left your readers hanging over a cliff and ready to drop off.

Comment by rone wells on 09/14/09
 Well when you gonna tell us what happened at the niebors ?

thank you for writing    Rone


Comment by Molly on 07/21/08
The author writes:

>>(continued in Chapter 2)

Apparently not, which is a crying shame -- it is rare and unusual to find something this well written. I guess we'll never know how the two sibs get out of their jam...


Comment by julie on 02/21/04
an interesting sstory a bit hard to follow and some backround would have been good will wait untill the next part to comment futher

Comment by Night Wolf on 04/04/03
I really loved this and would like to see part 2 but it's been years do you need help with it? If so I'm sure there are many others who would like to help you with this!

Comment by Robin on 09/03/02
Please finish part two, I can't wait.

Comment by Maggie on 02/20/02
I adored THE PLAN  part one ~ waiting for part two is like waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Comment by Kimberly. on 07/06/01
Don't keep us waiting too long for more.  The first part leaves us wanting.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/15/01
I enjoyed the story and hope you continue with it. It seems to have a good story line to it and I can see you will be able to do much with it. The first part could in fact happen in real life as you have written it so far. With the way you have constructed the story to this point I believe that you will have those who take the time to read it come back for more.
If this is your first story then you are on your way to becoming a regualr contributor for StorySite.
I also liked the way you had the boys get the perscriptions, I have heard some people really do it that way.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/14/01
wonderful tale. Know just how disapointed the character felt about given G.I. Joe action figures instead of what one really want. Love ending of this part.



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