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The Plan
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 04/30/08
great story well worth reading more please

Comment by SassySue on 10/28/07
I don't quite agree with the other commentators.  While Ms. White does show a hatred for men with many of her stories, she is no worse than Vickie Tern, whose stories are generally admired.  This is fiction after all.  Accepting it on those terms, I found the story quite well written and entertaining.  I just wish the changes had stopped while Shane could still perform.  If she had stopped at that point she would have had a docile, helpful husband who could still satisfy her without resorting to dildoes and extra-marital sex.

SS


Comment by Danielle L. Richards on 02/21/07
Hello:

  Again you disgust me. Slavery! God if she was so upset with him get a divorce!

  It would teach him a lesson and she could get on with her life. But to enslave not only his body but his Mind. That is monsterous!

  There is no way that you are a woman. No true woman would show us as such vile creatures. Now I am sure you are a man pretending to be a woman as you are always putting us in a very bad light. Why don't you go back to painting grafitti on trains!


Comment by marcus on 02/19/07
What can one say? I thought the story was pathetic from start to end.

Comment by suna on 02/18/07
I've read this before somewhere..... and it still seems to me that if she didn't need his income... it would have been better to divorce him.

instead of make a zombie....

oh well.. tis only a story




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