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Comment by rone welles on 08/22/12
Nice your Talent is showing Comment by Lee on 08/18/10 What a sweet story of a boy being introduced to girlhood. I particularly liked his mother's comment that if he got his ears pierced they would always show. How true that is! Once his ears are pierced he will always have those little holes in his lobes proclaiming his girl side. Every time he looks in a mirror he will smile to think that his ears will be pierced for the rest of his life. Comment by Josephine on 11/07/09 Lisa, your story makes me wonder just how many "daughters" are born every Halloween. Halloween seems like the perfect night of the year for a boy to let his mother see his girly side by wearing a dress in front of her for the first time. It's a good way for him to find out if she's going to accept his crossdressing or not. She probably won't run out to the mall to buy him sexy lingerie like the mom in your story, but you never know! Comment by Lesley Ann on 11/24/08 Wonderful story, but instead of ending it by having Michelle meeting up with a female classmate, why not have Michelle meet a boy? Then have her mother and sister begin slowly encouraging her to think about someday dating boys. It would be exciting to read further stories about Michelle someday experiencing the most ladylike thing of all - the thrill of making love to a man. Comment by Molly on 07/18/08 Life's a mall. Comment by Debilyn on 09/12/06 That's right. Why go back to being a boy when you can be a little lovely for life with all of the precious privileges permanent boys and men will never know? Comment by ellen on 11/04/03 beautiful story! I like more stories where the mom helps the boy dress as a girl. Comment by Dorothy on 09/26/03 Great story Lisa!Hope to see sequals to this one.Keep up the good work! Comment by Annie O on 09/26/03 A good story, as usual! Maybe a little more interaction with the "boy" and a new girlfriend in the future? Comment by David on 09/25/03 Great story. I would love to see what else happens in Michelle's life. Like does he get to dress up as the pixie for Hallowe'en? Comment by Stephanie C. on 09/25/03 This is a wonderful story, Lisa. Comment by Sandy Walker on 09/25/03 Thank you, Lisa, for another lovely story. Comment by Paula on 09/23/03 sweet story. lot of talent put into this work |
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