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Jane is ridiculous!
She should be transformed  into  man, and sentenced to life inprisonment.

An excellent series - shame there isn't more from this author.  

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Just a quickie to say how wonderful the story is and how jealous I am of that luckie Kelly.

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After Part 3:  We knew she was into domination from part 1.  I was really sad to find you writing him as a sub in part 3.  Why couldn't they just be equals?  I know, I know; personal preference.  The writing was excellent and the story well crafted.

I was won over early in the story by the relationship between Jane and Kyle/Kelly.  There was real tension in the attraction that each felt for the other; this made the story very believable. I'm anxious, and hopeful, that you two will not let these characters end their story too soon. As Kyle explores more of herself in the "role" of Kelly, as any actor knows, she reveals more about her true self than she can hide behind the guise of a character in a play. Keep up the good work, and thanks for a great story.
Peter.

Giggle, you naughty girl! I'm hooked!
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I can not wait for the rest of the story. I has to coming soon I hope. This is the best I seen yet. I have saved it and love to look back on it.

Ladies,

According to the below "review", you have to clean up your act or risk losing that reader.  Not exactly what I would consider a loss.

The thing that always amuses me about these losers (or, in her terms, loosers) is that they never seem to have a registered name or post a valid email address to backup their abusive nonsense.  They show up, dump a load of their vitriolic semi-literate monkey dung and vanish.  Apparently, they are more interested in utilizing their anonymity to berate and insult people than they are in entering any sort of meaningful dialog about the genre of fiction we all gather here to celebrate. Losing a reader like that should be looked upon as a blessing.

There are others who couch their complaints more gently, almost a plea for you to adopt their preferred road.  This is certainly not a reprehensible practice, as it is, first and foremost, a civilized approach. But it is still the tail attempting to wag the dog.  So, while these folks are not to be looked down on for expressing their hopes, neither are they to be coddled at the expense of your freedom of expression.

The bottom line is, whatever you do, do not allow others to tell you what to write. There is precious little benefit available to those of us who write this sort of fiction.  There's no money in it and damn little acclaim, so all you can reasonably expect is a level of personal satisfaction and the occasional "Well done" from some like-minded soul. Why on earth would you give up one of those in an attempt to please someone who, most likely, will only find something else to complain about next time?

I find your work to be powerful, exciting, a little scary and always refreshingly direct.  You do, on occasion, venture into territory that exceeds my personal interests or deal in issues with which I might feel uncomfortable, but I cannot complain.  First, it's your story and no one is forcing me to read it.  Second, I can sometimes learn something about myself by facing these issues head-on (and that's a wonderful bonus).  So, I would never want to see you censor your muse to please others.  In fact, I would argue vehemently against it.

In this particular story, I was very impressed by how you were able to explore the character of Jane, Kyle's "lover/tormentor".  As someone else mentioned, it will be interesting to get to the bottom of the issues that have her in such a turmoil and I will keep reading this series with great interest.

Your work is fascinating, provocative and honest.  Please don't let your readers dictate your path and, most importantly, don't let those few who lack the courage of their own convictions bully you into compromising that vision.

Hugs, Cissy

Loose The Doing A Guy - Or -  Loose This Reader !!
Guy Get's "Dressed Up", And Ends Up Giving A Blow
Job.  Why ??  Let's  Keep The Lesbian Love Thing,
Loose The "C.D." Doing Anymore Guy's Only The Ladies.

This is one reason why I don't drink alcohol...it makes people crazy and they do things they wouldn't otherwise do, if sober. this is actually a good dramatic story, too bad it had to be ruined by alcoholic hate. I will not read any more installments of this story. It makes me sick to think that people have to resort to alcohol when they are troubled. I never have, not in my 54 years (47 of those years as a female).

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Great story!   Like the basic theme behind it but put me in the same lot as a few others.   Please, please, pretty please don't let him like the idea that he gave the blowjob!   I'm all for him hating it 110% now that he is sobber, plus I think it would be nice to show him pissed as hell about it and putting a rift for a few days between him and Jane.   It would also be neat to show her hating what she did to Kelly and now fearing that her temper might push Kelly back to Kyle forever and she lose her dreamgirl.   Then once back together Jane uses her forceful nature to push Kyle/Kelly into the direction she wants...that of lesbian life.

All in all a wonderful story filled with great drama!   Now onto part 2!!!

-j-

Off to a good start. Good potential in that Jane's anger towards men, Kyle excepted, boils up in unexpected ways. Let Kyle/Kelly find out why Jane is punishing him/her with her roommate's boyfriend for the hurts (other) men have caused her. Also it might be a good idea for Kyle to be reeling from the double experience: of emerging as Kelly and for "servicing" the boyfirend.
Query to Kyle: where does acting the part of Kelly leave off and the reality begin?
Great beginning, I look forward to more of a great story!

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Great concept- good start- but then falls into the same tired old cliches. Guy puts on a pair of panties and that leads directly to giving blow jobs. Not too late to redeem this- have Kyle realize that it was just a dream (a la Bobby Ewing in Dallas) and get back on the real, genuinely original track- the relationship between a committed lesbian and her cross-dressd dreamboat creation.

Please, please, please don't take the road well traverled and have him find he liked the blow job.  And don't don't let him make up with Kelly, at least not quickly; He should go in the bathroom, scrub all the makeup off, cut the wig off if necessary, take off bra and boobs,and get the hell out of there!

4.0 as usual, ladies!  Loved the scene in the car's back seat where Kyle's inexperience with men leads to his involuntarily giving a hand job.  Very clever!

Hugz,
Ash