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The predicament of being unable to do other than obey all commands without will to resist is what makes this story sooo delicious. Exposure to co-workers solidifies the feeling of helpless humiliation ongoing in her career. I personally have transitioned back to the male role from the female vocation I began twelve years ago. The exciting memories of my professional past will be with me forever, as my friends know who I presented at the time. Please continue this wonderful story beyond...

Bad story, I don't like this!
Silvia.

Hmm . . . Leighann wants help -- the only help I would offer is to HELP her into a sheer white blouse, above the knee and tight black pencil skirt with matching bolero jacket, seamed hose and six inch stiletto heels, which is perfect office attire, garish makeup, long nails and bleacvhed blonde banana curls . . . hmm . . .
MORE PLEASE

I absolutly love this story!  Please please write more chapters.

Oh poor Lee! I really feel sorry for her.

How much some of us who are sissies would love to be taken down this path  However where it stands now there is this vicious unforgiving ( a  very nonfemale wife) having a nonsexual pleasure for her own benefit  I hope you will take part four into a contrite serving Lee and a loving wife who enjoys her new maid and her maids new men friends too.  Bye the way  my wife changed my name frorm Lee to sissy Lee lee under interesting conditions..but hers was an act of love mixed with humour for both of us...hope your Lee gets to enjoy the happy part of being a female...thanks for the story as far as it has gotten

Please, please help us by adding an update to this. I would dread to be in his shoes after the manicure and pedicure. In fact, his shoes are the only item she's left to change. Perhaps she could make him go shopping for shoes wearing his tights over his painted toenails.

I thought parts one and two were fantastic. I really enjoyed the story line and how he has no choice but to wear what she wishes him to. Please add more chapters to what is one of the best stories I have read.Karen

Another pathetic, stupid husband and vicious, selfish wife story. I was hoping that you might come to your senses before part 3 and add a dose of realism into this ridiculous story. Seems to me that this type of story shows a distinct lack of imagination on the author's part and where is the suspense and/or titillation when the Guy has no choice in what he does. Reading the reviews that have been done so far I have to assume that most of the reviewers are wishing that this could have happened to them and this is the real judgement on the worth of the story; others are just too sickened by it to comment which was my initial reaction.

You must add doing his hair . maybe a perm and add lots of detail.  

Good story but dont go crazy! Keep it realistic or he would get fired. I might suggest you introduce another man into it so his wife can show him what it feels when your lov one has sex with someone else. Maybe even fuck him while he's there. But the story is very good and well writen. Hurry the next chapter. Please. H

its a wondefull story i was riveted to the end well laid out what a way to get revenge on an adultery playing husband much more please this it turning out to be a great story great tale of revenge more please brilliant the writing style was great and the whole thing well laid out thankyou

It's a wonderful story , i really like it .  Please write more .
There is also ( to me at least ) verry humorfull  tint in it which i really love .

Louisa
    Please, please, please continue this story - it is probably the best I have read so far.  I love the way you are taking things gradually, and your descriptions of how Lee feels are so realistic (I've been there myself, sitting in the car working up the courage to get out).  I have been waiting patiently for the next instalment to appear and I can wait no longer.  I don't usually leave comments, but I am so keen to see more of this story.

thanks and regards
     Jessica

Wow, great story. I hope you continue to add more chapters. I love the way you describe his humiliation. His wife is a fantasy come true. It was great when Sue told him to talk with the girl from the office if she asked him again.

bravissimo

Excellent story.  Lee's humiliation is so exciting, I am constantly dreaming about what is next for him (keeping my panties wet).  Please help us by writing the next part.

of course you know i love this story, very exciting to read ! thanks so much for mentioning me in your dedication, that was sweet ! i look forword to more chapters and more humiliation for your poor victim ! excellent, excellent, keep up the great writing and thanks !
                                                      muffy

Please help me
You can't stop now. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I too am chiming in with my compliments for your story as I hope that you keep writing and that you don't wait long to provide part IV and thayt you keep pushing Lee's further feminization and public humiliation.  I am hoping that beyong Lee's upcoming manicure and pedicure, you have "her" pierced in multiple locations ... maybe even tattoed ... and of course chastised ... as Lee should not be permitted any sexual pleasure while "she" serves her wife and anyone else Sue desires.

I just got in to your stories but am surprised you don't write more. Don't be discourage if people don't leave remarks its just the nature of the net.

i love the hypnosis and mind control stories public humiliation when he took his jacket off in mall will she go all the way with him the funny thing about stories like this is the girls seem to always want to turn their spouses into secretaries let them lose their good jobs for menial ones try a different ending her becomes her boss as woman maybee part 12 who cares about typing errors good story keep it up..

Please don't stop now!  Please post Part III!

don't make us wait !!  more, more more!

Great story...please add part 3 soon.

wow !! i loved your story, especially part two. i just love the public humiliation aspect and the fact that your poor victim is forced to dress as a sissy and not a woman ! excellent work from my point of view. thanks for sharing your work with me and others ! please go for a part three !
                      thanks so much !
                                 muffy

Good i really do love how this story is coming along.  I wish someone would come alog and do this to me.  Wow.  Excellent

This is a dream come true. Alot of guys wont admit it but to be in a situation where you can control your own will and do what you are told. I cant wait till the next chapter comes out.
Stephy

After part 2:  I'm sorry to see that Sue seems to be turning into a full blown sadist.  How unfeminine yet how undeniably female. (See Rudyard kiplings "The female of the Species")

I'd say it's time for his demotion to the clerical staff.  He certainly has the right outfit.  Skirts to come soon, I hope!

Please keep the story going but retain the male in him and forcing new things on him....love the story

Great storey. Please continue

Keep up the conflict of the male knowing he's a male and forced to wear female clothing. If you're continuing the story, have the additional clothing added slowly. How about just trying on high heels in the store? If you have him changed into a transexual you will lose the conflict. Use the spellcheck, your grammar and spelliing are a distraction

please do continue with this fine story, i love it !! i hope you have the victim forced to dress as a sissy, feminine yet difinately male.keep up the fine work !! thanks.
                                     muffy

Yes, Please continue.  Love the story :)

great so far. please don't let the husband ever accept it. he should always feel the humiliation, but only be turned on when dressed.

Terrific!! Great start. Pretty please continue. If Lee is led to a full shemale existence, while not losing his male perspective, his agony being unable to avoid his fate would be an apt & fitting situation. Maybe he could eventually be released from hypnotic control but because of being a full fledged shemale, realize that there is no going back to being a male. A chasity device should help achive his conversion. Then he could take an appropriate female position out of the house. I look forward to your next instalment.

great story!!!!!cant wait for more

Good story...can't wait for the next part.

Good story.  Use spell checker.

I read the first 20% of the story, and thought the story line was great. However the spelling errors and need for proof-reading made it difficult to enjoy to it's fullest.

Do you have someone who is going over your story and doing a compete job of editing? If not, I would be glad to see what I can do in that regard. There is no point in my doing it, if someone is already at work on it.

Let me know either way.

Zip

Great story so far keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next part.

This was a wonderful story sweetie.  Keep up the good work regardless of ANY negative feedback. You have a GREAT imagination.  Respectfully,
Krissy

Wonderful story, please keep gping I would love to hear more about what happens  and the situations she gets her husband into.

Louisa,

The story is done in a very nice outline. There is that hint of mystery present throughout. Continue your method, it allows the reader to identify with the characters. I do hope you will continue this story.

Critique: Reread your story for potential errors in spelling, grammar and capitalization. Some spell-checkers will not catch everything. Try to break up individual speech between characters. The story is your art, take time in it's creation. Always make your art the best it can be.

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Jenelle

I loved the first part of your story. Please continue it, and keep up the great work!

Love the story.Hope to read more.Really like it when a wife takes control of her hubbie.

So far, so good.  I would like to know some more about the wife's motivation; has she lost her love for him and wants only punishment, or does she still love him and want to rehabilitate him, even if only as a girlfriend?  I hope the latter.  I would like to see her make him slowly come out as a transexual, but as an ultra-feminine lady, not a slut (way to common) and become her secretary.  Along the way, Leighann sees the error of Lee's ways and they end up either girlfriends or lesbian lovers.  I think it should be rehabilitation rather than revenge, although certainly a little revenge along the way is justified.

I also think a detailed description of a salon trip for "the works" and a detailed shopping trip where she has to enthusiasticly pick out her ultra-feminine secretarial wardrobe would be GREAT!  Again I urge a lady rather than the whole overdone slut thing.  Maybe his wife tells him to pick out what he would like a secretary to wear thinking he will pick slut and she is pledasantly surprised when he picks feminine but ladylike, and this is what changes her mind from revenge to rehabilitation.

Oh yes, more please!

I like this.  Definately some editing work needed but otherwise a fine opener for a hypnosis story.  I'd have liked to see more of the buildup, though (the nightie moments and such).  Love to see more.

Good start. A few more typos than needed, but I like the flow and the theme.  Leighanne would be a great secretary for his wife, I'd say!