Bad story, I didn't like.
Silvia.

after re-reading this story I have to say that Jeri's 'coming closer to sister' thing felt ah...rushed and unexpected. it really had no explanation behind it, though I did like how you illustrated Jeri's struggles.

asweet story with undertones of cruelty. The plot is pretty straight forward thought the subplots add colour to the action.  Character development is good for all the characters but Cheryl's seems to vacillate without identifiable reason. If Cheryl had witch power enough to drive off the gang of three, would it not work for other thing? I.E. changings Jerry's/jeri's medicines, or preserving her from the manipulations of the gang to ensnare Jeri?  Please continue this story Your Sharlow Winslow series was very good.  Thank you for sharing with us.

I just started with 'Pleaser's Tale' and realize the story is part of larger whole.... what I've seen so far suggests it'll be quite an reading adventure by the time i'm done! (btw jerry ooh what a way to loselose!)

touched use emotionally at the start of the story and brought joy to our hearts at the ending. Wonderful read.