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The Ploy
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by thisisme on 02/19/14
Nice. Everyone has a place in this world but few really find it. Most of us just settle for good enough.

Comment by Sam on 01/27/14
i thought this story was really great,i enjoyed reading it.I was so glad that they had a happy ending

Comment by Maid Nancy on 01/18/11
I enjoy the story a lot and when my wife introduced me to be her uniformed maid I was very happy in my new role. I love to cook, clean and make my own uniforms. The minute I put on my white pinafore. I am motivated to do all my housework.I tell my Mistress every day how greatfull I am that she made me her domestic servant. I wear my uniform with pride. It is for that very reason I feel very close to this story.
Thank you, Maid Nany

Comment by Silvia. on 10/25/09
Oh, GOD!
I really didn't like your story.
Bad,bad,bad..........................
Silvia.

Comment by Bobbie on 11/25/07
Getting around to reading at rathera late date.

Is it not amazing how we are sometimes so anxious to make or help someone to make something of themselves, we have no inkling of what
they really might be best at or want to do.

Finding out that a loved one does not have to be at the top of the stack to be happy is sometimes the hardest thing to understand.
We are not all bosses sometimes fixing or making things is the most
wonderful thing in the world for a man or a woman. We are just slow
to uinderstand that in ourselves or the people we love.


Comment by suna on 02/10/06
Yes, not everyone should be in-charge.. some are better when given a task without boundaries on how to complete the task.  To be innovative is a gift.

Comment by julie j on 09/13/04
this is a sweet story bit hard at first when he did not relise he was being set up by his wife& maid it opened his eyes at last &enjoyed himself at the end well done good ending with being given the option to be himself again very surprised at his answer



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