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You don't wrote a good story this time.
Roger is a good guy, and what they did to him wasn't fair. Virgina deserved what they did to her, but not Roger.
I didn't like this story.
Silvia.

Another strange story.
I liked the beginning, but then again, beginnings are easy :)
Then when the story started to unroll I got more and more confused.

It was like trying to put an action inside a porn story.
Myself I had some hopes for a kinky love story, but alas, to my disappointment there was none to be found.
A very clinically inclined story about how to manipulate.

But the abuse and humiliation was held to a minimum word wise which I'm thankful for.
Sh* I got no real handle on how to read this one :)
More than I had to skim the last chapter as I got impatient..

As for it being girls instead of boys bearing the humiliations?
So what, does anyone see life caring for your gender when it deals out pain?
All takes part and none is excluded :)

I would call it a experiment, lacking somewhat in the compassion and empathy needed for making it truly readable.
But it is a accomplished writer of good skills creating this..
Even though I might have wished for a more inciting and exacting outcome :)

Cheers
Yoron.

You know, I actually found it kind of refreshing to read a story about someone (Roger) who was willing to sacfrifice everything to save a woman (Virgina) who was bent on his destruction because of something he had written.  I'm just sorry it has to take the form of a story like PonyGirl.  because it is not going to get as broad a circulation as it desrves.  Keep up the good work, Barbie.  I can't tell you what to write but I found this parable both refreshing and entertainging.

Clem

I thought it was a great story. I would love to see a sequel.

Degrading to women? So then stories about a guy turning into a woman and then becoming a slut isn't as degrading to women?  Get off the high horse!  The story is fiction.  Erotic fiction!  I'm sure there are people out there that find ponygirls just as wonderful to read as TV or TG stories.  I've never been a fan of ponygirl stories myself, but read this one because of Lee's other amazing stories.  I will have to say that I fell into the new areas of Deity spin off that she has crafted here.  Hell I even went and read a few other ponygirl stories just to see how other authors did them and found a few of them as enjoy able to read as TG stories.  I will even go so far as to say that I do hope each of the new ponygirls stay in or gain the power to morph into their ponygirl forms.  Roger sure as hell didn't seem to mind the few days he spent as one.  Of coarse he also didn't what him or the bitch to remain ponygirls forever.  Just every now and then as a little erotic fun.  

I look forward to more from this author and hope she returns to show us the final fate of Roger and crew.  After all will his friend from town run across Roger as a ponygirl?  

-j-

Degrading to women? Nonsense. No more so than any other D/s theme is degrading to those who enjoy the "bottom" role. The ponygirl element in this story was certainly not handled in a way that made any sort of statement about all women. Regardless of the fact that other stories with this theme may have been guilty of degrading women, this one was not. Let's not project our personal hang-ups onto a story in which they don't belong.

This is a very well written story with some very compelling characters. Lots of mystery surrounding everything that is mostly cleared up by the end of the story in a very artful way.

Ponygirls are not a huge interest of mine. But the story presented them in a way that didn't turn me off: a sort of soft erotic angle, rather than hardcore bondage. The non ponygirl elements of the story were compelling as well.

The chief villain of the story ("Virgina") was unfortunately two dimensional, standing in stark contrast with virtually every other character, who all seemed to have more depth. Some parts perhaps went on a bit long, while others jumped around to quickly.

All in all though, it was excellent as a mysterious and vaguely erotic story. I look forward to more from this author.

I agree the pony girl story is degrading to women. Now that I said that I want to say that it this one is better written than most pony girl stories I read in the past. The way the story ended makes me want to know how the bet turns out.

While Virgina was a bitch, I agree with her on one thing:  The whole ponygirl thing is degrading to women.  Now that I've got that off my chest, I must say that I tried to be outraged by this whole story only to realize how carefully the author worked everything out.  (I shouldn't have been surprised, given her skillful and impressive earlier stories.)  The only thread left dangling is Raul, deliberately keeping the two ponygirls longer than they needed to be to learn their lessons just for his own pleasure; he needs a long spell (pun intended) as a ponygirl.  I DO NOT think Roger or Virgina will want to be ponygirls again as they have found how degrading it really is. At least I hope they won't, and I hope Roger turns his talents to stories and artwork that uplift and empower women (whether genetic or transformed) rather than degrade them.