XqDyKM There as definately a lot to learn about this issue. I love all the points you made.

Q9ZETb I am continually invstigating online for tips that can aid me. Thx!

hLVGuR Really enjoyed this article.Really thank you!

i have to say this was one of the best ever i wish this was me as the Ponygirl i hope you keep it going

I could almost wish that it would happen to me. < sigh > Such wonderful fantasies.

well the way i see it you wouldn't have the website listed as 01 if you didn't want to continue the story i'm sure your charachters will grow in many ways should you choose to add to this wonderful piece of fantasy.

I loved this story.I hope there are farther adventures of Cynetta

An interesting combination of characters.  Ponies and Aliens.  Sounds like the making of a great screenplay to me.

Karen, all of your Cynetta stories are good but this is the cream of the crop.  It's not overly long but packs quite a wallop and leaves me wanting more.  I've read it many times and couldn't enjoy it more.

This is one of my favorite stories.  Very well written and intriguiging.  I do wish, very strongly, you decided to continue this story, into a series.  Thanks!

I loved this story! I really really would look forward to and eagerly encourage you to continue the installments, perhaps creating the longer epic it is a fantastic start to!

Thank you!

Thank you Karen I read this story before but forgot a comment.It was very good and I really enjoyed it

Being a big fan of Jack Chalker, especially his Well World series I found the transformation and the detailed description quite comparable to those he gives which also involve radical physical changes (for that matter species changes). Attention is paid to details as to what Bob can physically do or not do in his new condition. The use of the dog as the identifier was a subtle touch that speaks about how well the author thinks things through. Of course this story would be an excellent candidate for illustration - if anyone dared do so after seeing the fate Bob suffered!
  I also found myself comparing Bob to the poor soul in Edgar Allen Poe's, "Cask of Amantillado" as he sat in his jungleur's outfit (with bells,) chained to the wall as he was bricked in for all eternity. The realization of what was occurring not really hitting home immediately and leaving us at the end to wonder what his thoughts might be as he faced his new future. Pony up the installment soon so we can all find out!