The story practically paints the kid as an ideal teen boy. Seems rather selfish of these four bitches to manipulate the poor kid.

good story. a trip to a beauty shop for pretty waves and curls so he could be primped in front of a mirror while his clit is rubbed off would be a fun sequel. he could get a creamy cum gloss put on his lips to lick off.

The idea of James getting his clothes wet and changing into mens clothing that the girls are wearing, seems silly and misses the point. Jeans and shirts have always been male clothing for performing the most dirty jobs that were required. if James was to introduced to a more gentle side of life, for him to be dressed up in the girls male clothing seems a little silly.

This is a great story.  I know it is an exploration into male feminity, but doesn't it all start out that way.  Usually with a females guiding hand.  Mine was similar to the boy, but started at a, much younger age, almost under similar circumstances.

Too bad this has never been continued.

Thought you wrote a great story, it appears that you wrote from first hand experience.

great story so far more please

Good story so far. I just hope that you let James go a lot further than being a feminized male, and actually like males.

poor inoscent james that a good title to start the story i feel that james  knew what was going on all the time but decided to play along its to easy on monday he was suprised at the underwear butput on yellow panties without any arguements, he must be enjoying himself i would like to see in part 2 how far he goes his mother giving him vitamins that are really female hormones this would be better for the rest of the story and i feel that with him as gentle & shy  as he is it will be easy to tranform him into a girl permantly great story welldone

Great story. I hope it continues soon. Like one of the previous posters, I like James being an androgynous/sissified boy instead of becoming or dressing completely as a girl. There aren't a lot of stories like this. I'm looking forward to James's first pair of pantyhose. With shaved legs they cannot be far behind. Great work.

Yes, I agree with the others: this is well on the way to being a
really good story.  But...the beginning is kind of strange.  The
way it is worded, I wondered whether this was Poor Innocent James 2
& where Poor Innocent James 1 could have gone. Yes, I know about
"in medias res," & of course you want to get the backstory in as
economically as possible, but I think you overdid it. A flaw (not
serious & not irremediable) in an otherwise delicious story. And I
agree with Jezzi that James doesn't strike me as poor or innocent.
Certainly not poor, with all those sweet things being done for him.
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--Pervy

This is a very nice, sweet story.  Please continue it soon.

Great start!  I get the impression from what you write, though,  that James would consider himself neither poor, in the sense of being mistreated or manipulated, nor innocent.  It sounds like he is a budding TS, and I wouldn't be surprised if  very soon "she" has her own agenda that doesn't include stopping at being an "effeminate male."  The ladies may have created a "Francinestein."


I'm not clear I guess, though, on what exactly you mean by an "effeminate male."  When I think of an effeminite male, I think of the stereotypical gay guy.  Do you mean the girls want him to be like that, or to become a crossdresser?   I'm a CD.  My drab half and I work very hard to make sure that when in drab mode, I do NOT appear stereotypically gay, that is I don't display a feminine look,  mannerisms, or speech patterns.  When in femme mode, however, I try to look and act as a real woman would.  No panties on under the business suit or kissing on the cheek in greeting for this guy; no yuccky jockey shorts or a plain face for this T-girl!  

My experience is that being percieved by the public as being inbetween is the way to ridicule and harassment.  Being either of the two genders is not.  I have never been harrassed in femme mode, even when read, and I believe that is because the people who read me believe, at some level, that I AM feminine, not effeminate.  The ladies will not be doing james a favor by turning him into an effeminate male as I understand one.

However, an effeminate male should not, I believe,  be confused with a male whose character some would lable feminine - traits like concern for others, teamwork, concern for relationships, being romantic, doing things like cooking or sewing as well as mowing the lawn or working on the car, because they need to be done, etc. These I believe are human rather than strictly feminine characteristics.  

    WONDERFUL start!!  I love the concept, and your writing abilities make for a very interesting and "Wanting" script.  Please continue with the idea of a FEMINIZED male, and the desire of the girls and women to be in a relationship with him, and hopefully others!
  GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                                        Patti

a good start, although i hope you keep James looking like an androgynous or sissified boy than as a girl.  that's what makes this story so interesting.  perhaps james is ready for a trip to the unisex beauty parlor, enjoying the attention of a gay hairstylist who knows what the girls are up to.  and i will look forward to james being talked into wearing a skimpy men's bikini bathing suit.

Okay, you got a start. Now, keep him on the track of liking the softer things, and not those masculine jerks. A love of the beautiful is a wondrous thing to behold!

This is superbly written and well conceived story.  The tension builds slowly and seduces the reader into wanting more just as our hero is being slowly and deliciously seduced into the pleasure and privilege of dressing as a girl.
Cordially,
Mardee

What a cute story! Although you've got to make him a little bit squeamish -- it adds to the tension (as earlier in the story).

This is going to be nearly as good as "The New Squad Leader" which is one of my favorites. Hope sometime you do a sequel to that one.  It cries out for a sequel.  This one is wonderful.  You have a flair for a realistic, stimulating way of laying out a plot...