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Portrait of a Lady
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia  (from Brazil) on 02/19/09
I was disappointed with the slave end of the story, just like Jezzi.
Bye.

Comment by Cassandra on 04/08/04
Jennifer,

I have really been a big fan of yours. Your story concepts are generally excellent and your writing extremely well done. This tale proved to be no exception. I did love your concept of a "painting class" as a vehicle for transformation. The writing moved smoothly and easily. Sadly, the "slave" outcome was a disappointment. In context though, I do understand the necessity for this result.

Keep up your really good writing.

Hugs,

Cassandra

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/07/04
I loved the use of the painting class as the transformation process - very well written - but I was disappointed in the "slave" ending.



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