Jenifer is a real bitch 15 years of marriage and her husband ius forced to flea .What does she do , support him no she fucks his publisher when he has only been gone for 6 weeks.
Go to her wedding, he should have shown her where he fell in and pushed her in and left her.
BITCH WITH A CAPITAL B

Jennifer is evil. She did this with Jim.
She doesn't deserve to be happy, she is a very bad person.
Very bad story.
Silvia.

Nice story.  I wish it had been me that fell in that hole,lol!

I found this thru "On this day" link.......  WHAT is all this about Brit- and non-Brit English......  GROW UP you people.  This is a good story,  nicely paced and,  unbelievably,  believable!!!!   Lucky husband!   Let him learn make-up and grow his hair but stay randy for his lovely wife!  LOL WbG xx

Thank you Caroline  :)
For finishing this story. It sure was a surprise how it ended.
Hugs, Fran

Hi Caroline :)
I found the story very interesting and I am sad that it isn't complete. Is there a chance that it will go any further?
Hugs, Fran

Caroline, my dear, I enjoy your writing very much.  If people are so lacking in intelligence that they cannot interpret British to non-British English, they have a major problem (and it is NOT your writing)!  Please follow your muse and continue your tale and let the assholes (nice non-gender specific term) fall to the side.  We your fans appreciate you!  Please continue this piece and give us much more in the future.
Thank you for sharing your tale and wonderful talent with us,
Sharlee

I found no problems reading and understanding this piece.  Frankly, Carolyn, if it's true to form Belinda will end up staying this way and possibly finding a whole new life.  I'd say if she decides she likes it in France, she could probably disappear there, and she does type well, and after her bad experiences, maybe she could make her living as a typist while working on the book, or find herself happier as a working woman in France.

I'm a bit gobsmacked about  the foreign language comments.   I'm born and raised in the USA and had no problems sorting the story whatsoever.  :-)

I like the story so far, although it would have been interesting to see the direction it would go had he not been a closeted dresser.  I'm awaiting part 3.

Hey, I couldn't tell if Part One was Brit-English or any other English. My point was that, due to the font used, the story was virtually unreadable. I note that a more standard font is used in Part Two, but the printing is too small.

A very nice little story.

It saddens me that someone would consider Brit-english as non-english, it just takes a bit of thinking to get use to it.

O.K., I'll be the first to say it- the whole story  was Greek to me. I understand that Crystal would like a more international flavor to her stories, but she might alert us first that a story is in a non-English language.

Gentle loving and fun. I loved it!