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Comment by alpha q on 10/28/19
He certainly got what was deserved, such a sissy. Comment by Olivia on 11/12/18 the second chapter is in on fictionmania Comment by barbara on 07/17/18 is there a second part to this story? Comment by felicia on 06/15/16 Can anyone recommend more stories like this one? Comment by Francis on 02/21/15 I do not understand the negative comments, I thought it was a wonderful story, I wish there were more stories like this. Comment by ashley on 11/05/13 Nice change from the normal. Well done. Comment by Johnny on 01/23/12 Nice story! I wish you would do more to expand upon what happens to poor David at home... Comment by Blane J on 04/09/11 Great over the top fantasy! Please write more. Comment by Bruce on 05/12/09 mean and cruel, u need to sit down and discover why you hate men so much Comment by Paula on 03/23/09 can't think of the Deviantart fan art site but remind me of the comic story THE CLEANSER that posted on one of them. Comment by Fushigi Kage on 03/23/09 Love forced by machine/robotic stories. Please write more! Great story! Comment by Hannah on 03/22/09 Yoron, ever hear the term Sci-Fi? How about fantasy? I ask, because you put the two together...Sci-Fi/Fantasy, and expecting it to be realistic is...well, unrealistic. Of course nobody IRL would accept that happening to them. That's why it's *called* fantasy in the first place. Comment by Yoron on 06/04/08 There seem to be some real disturbed visions here. Comment by Jillian on 05/12/08 Dela! Great story enjoyed the mix of over the top sci fi with some wild forced femme storyline. Reminded me of some of the great super heroe style stories of the past. Hope to see some more fun stories from you soon! Comment by Tammi on 04/21/08 I hope they have more adventures. I can't wait to read about her new wardrobe waiting for her at home. Will she go out dancing? Will she kiss a man? How far will this go? Comment by tony on 04/17/08 good story will be wating to hear what happens when they get home thank you for your work |
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