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The Pre-Nuptual
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/14/10
BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silvia.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/22/08
WHEN WILL YOU FINISH IT?

Comment by julie j on 03/12/05
intresting comment an ideal way to cut down the divoice rate
seem approaprate i would like a longer story with more explanation

Comment by Nellie D on 06/01/03
A cute sweet shorty that had just a hint of humor. The proverbial walk a mile in her shoes. Thank you Ann

Comment by Paula on 06/01/03
normally I like short stories but this one was a bit too short. It might of been better if it actually went as far as the wedding or at least not left Paul hanging their with asking the groom the questions that probably went through his mind after the groom's final comment.



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