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Preparations for Afternoon Tea
by Suzette la Soubrette

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Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/18/14
snJL4m I loved your article post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

Comment by Daisy on 03/20/09
Excellence

Comment by oh that your astory was thousdands OF MG MORE on 11/04/07
oh that your story was several mg mpre

Comment by Mistress Geri on 03/28/06
Ohhhhh, bells and more bells!  I loved the playfulness of the Mistress.  I love pony gurls...especially with bells.  (smiles)
I found this story well written and not drawn out like some stories I have read.

Ms. Geri


Comment by juliej on 08/25/05
the story was intresting well written i feel it would have been bettewr to see how it got into this predicerment at the begging

Comment by sissy patsey belle on 09/02/04
Outstanding Story! I particularly enjoyed the use of erotic humiliation. I believe humiliation is one of the strongest of male erotic feelings. I also enjoyed the use of his vulnerability and exposure as drivers of his emotions. His realization that she will take him to the limit of forced feminization was superb. I love the small touches like the bells, which is how I got my femme name (another story). This is the best story I have read for some time. Will you be continuing this story? Will you be going back to the start, to tell the story of his transformations into the French Maid and Barbie?  Keep up the great work!

Comment by Ingrid on 06/04/04
Suzette,
I loved your story. I am also anxiously waiting for MORE!

Ingrid

Comment by J on 11/03/03
just cant wait for more dont keep us waiting love the poodle syle and the pony

Comment by ALynn on 07/05/01
The pagentry that plays across  the reader's mind as they are drawn up into this world of Femdom created so lovingly by suzette.  Almost can feel the sights and sounds; as well as the touch, the tastes and textures of this world.  

The main character is a "french maid" who was a "self-sufficient" male who dominated his world before he came into Debra's.  It is deliciously evil, as the mere male researchs his own changes from the trainings, drugs/herbals, and surgeries.  Most of all, the "hold" that keeps "her" in this world is his devotion to Debra.  Beautifully crafted,  I enjoy it reading.

I am waiting, suzette la soubrette, for the next installment.  Don't keep this Woman waiting, sweet girl.   As another has found out, I don't play nicely (~smile~)

Comment by Cayli on 07/02/01
I like the story, I thought it was done well for a first attempt.  It could have followed a darker theme in my thoughts.  I like the fact that "you" did your own research into how to feminzie yourself, nice touch.  Good thinking, suzette.
You mentioned it was a "blueprint" for your own life as a feminized maid, sex poodle (I like), a fuck slut, a barbie, or a pleasure pony.  It could use greater detail for each identity you assume,  how, why and what pleasures you received.  In other words - Your failures, torments and triumphs.

Congratulations, suzette on a piece well done but fluffy and a bit clownish.  I want to read more of your works

Comment by Mina  Pandora deSade on 06/11/01
Intéresser...fairly well written, more then just another attempt at S&M/BDSM lifestyling, allthough it seems to be more a forum for various fetishes then a story.It does stand on it's own though.Image de Wonderfull....Mina deSade

Comment by Jenelle Lefey on 06/08/01
Suzette,

What can I say, wonderful imagery. Gives a great sense of expectancy. Please continue your work and imagination.

Be well and take care

Jenelle



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