GNBiZa I really like and appreciate your post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

I like this story, even the part where he tasted a bit of himself.  It reminded me of when I was 13 and my mother had dressed me in the prettiest dress I had ever saw at that time (1963) and the similar circumstances  of self examination.
 You need to add additional chapters to this story.  Did he ever get to know the joys of wearing pretty dresses or skirts. Did he come to accept the fact that he was transgendered.  You see these are questions that need to answered.  I hope that you will add them to this story to make it complete.

Good story for a while. I hope you don't put incest in this story.
Silvia.

Your story was a little different to most but still very enjoyable. As some have said it has taken you 6 years to write the sequel. Have you started yet?

Nice story.

What a wonderful mother. As for the grammar who cares the story was good.

Hi, lovely story, please try adding pretty vintage style clothe and plastic aprons to your story,pretty aprons should be written about alot more. Just a thought. CINDY

Maggie
I have just read this story for the third time because I loved it so much. Also, I just keep going back to see if you had submitted another part and only to saddly find that there is not one. Please do us, your readers, the pleasure and submit more. I would be very happy to see just how much further into dressing it will go. As an idea, would be to dress fully for a while at home and then let the venture to include a shopping trip to the mall and also going out to dinner as mother and daughter. Anyway, thanks again for this wonderful story and regardless any of the negative comments, please continue.

Denise

I totally agree with a couple of the other posters, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the next episode. Thankyou for your efforts again Maggiecat. I for one appreciate the feelings you give me when I'm reading your work. xxx

this story is just the same as happen to me and my son georgie we did not have the frilly clother you had  we just manageed with my every day clothies i had year 2000/2005 georgie an i are very happy on hoildays and long week ends

an intresting story well written so soft &gentle more please

A delightful story and pretty pink panties too! What more can one wish for?

I can hardly wait for the sequel. Michelle must gently make love with her mother.....That can be the only beautiful ending

WOW!  That is wonderful... please continue!  Thanks, chrissy

Maggie Cat:
  One suggestion: Don't fall into the need for excessive sex descriptions. Mother-son love is a wonderful thing, work on that angle, have him look for a girl as loving as his mother, and seeking her out.
  If you use Quotes around dialog, it will be easier to understand.
  And, is that percentage for Gynecomastia correct? Seems high to me.

A sweet story for sure, but the spelling and grammer needs a lot of work.

Can you write in Word and just use the spell checker in it????

A very nice story.  You have a flair for detail and emotion.  The story flowed very well and stayed interesting from start to finish.

A few suggestions:

When characters are speaking, put their words in quotes.  Describing a dialog is something to avoid because it is more tedious for the reader. Dialog descriptions should only be used to avoid monotony of repeated phrases or to summarize.  Check with a volunteer editor if you're not sure how to format a dialog (click on Author's Corner).

The word "cummy" was kind of distracting to me.  It is kind of a juvenile rendering of a very adult word, and though Michelle might use it, I doubt the mother would.  You might think about avoiding slang terms altogether and just let description do the job.  In the context of the story, I think "warm fluids" or "sticky mess" would be just even more descriptive than the word "cummy".

Anyway, excellent story.  Keep up the good work.

-Ami

A very touching and emotional story.  I cannot wait until you publish the next chapter.

What a sweet, sweet story.  That child is certainly blessed.  Wistfully, I wish it were me.