i think this was a brilliant story well done great work through out i will read some of the really longer stories laterthank you

 Some of your best work .... I loved this ... best ending in a long time ..... you suprize me sometimes ....

peace  Rone :)  

Another fine tale by Jennifer. Well set-up, and once again a mean boy gets his due. Thanks for entertaining us with your stories!

I enjoyed this; it seemed realistic, although the itching powder was a bit much, and for their own protection, I hope Hillary and Co. shadowed Susan on her journey; they could have been really screwed if anything actually nasty had happened.   If I had been Harry, when home I would have immediately called each and every one of my "instructors" and apologized for my behavior.  He might have avoided those photos that way.  Oh, well.

<<  And his reward came in the form of an email he received from Carrie that led him to a fulfilling courtship. And after that? Well that would be telling, wouldn't it? 'All's well that ends well' as the poet says. Let's just leave it at that.  >>

You may, but I won't.  Since this IS TGfiction, my guess would be that Carrie, a rather strong willed girl, had an adoring "Susan" in frocks and frillies quite often.  I imagine they both made beautiful brides  :-)